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for Playboy X

by marvelmaster616

person molace
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent fic in every means. Please make another lance/wanda part. Thanks and best regards
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter loved the bit at the beginning
person Jenskott
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six

That Playboy issue has been like dropping an atomic bomb in the mansion. The ripples of the shockwave are striking everybody.

Too bad nobody in here has apparently heard about protection. :)

Man, this keeps getting more interesting!
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter loved the beginning scene
person Jenskott
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Four

Wow. Warren and Rogue? I did NOT see that coming. Very original, I'd not have thought of it.

Jamie should be more careful. When your girlfriend is a werewolf, she can feel prone to mate when she's horny.

At least she didn't chew his head off. Who could have imagined petite, shy Rhane could be so aggresive? :)
person Jenskott
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Five

Teens are weird. Jubilee was needed, Bobby was needed, and each one's first impulse was jerking off, then getting angry, and THEN making something about their mutual craving.

Fortunately, sanity took over, and both realized it's better making love than war.

As far as I'm concerned, Tab deserves the frustration. For how long she has mocked Scott and Jean? Well, now she'll learn. Hah!
person Jenskott
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two

Ah, Hugh Hefner. Example for men everywhere.

I admit I had a chuckle when Jean said "they" were real. But in fact is more real than evolution alters the physical built, instead of giving special powers.

Apparently, neither Scott nor Jean had troubles for fitting in that place. Heh.

I can't wait to read their teammates' reactions.
person Jenskott
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Three

Geez,there has been consequences, indeed. I was laughing seeing both groups' reaction.

Poor Rogue. She was forced to play with herself while her brother could have a nice roll in the hay with his girlfriend. It isn't fair. Rogue must be satisfied! :D
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
person Jenskott
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Part One

A Scott/Jean fuckfest is a perfectly good way to start a fic, let me tell you. Very good.

So good Hugh Hefner is now interesed in it. Heh. I can only imagine how much fun we'll get out of this. :)

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