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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is awesome. I started reading this, making mental notes of what to critique; the random changes from 1st person to 3rd and back again, punctuation,yes...grammer and the overall schizophrenic feeling it had because of the unstability: but fuck it.
Its great, don't change it. Ever. It's amazing and your tone sticks out.
In fact, I'm so impressed I want to mother your children.
Over 9,000/5
Its great, don't change it. Ever. It's amazing and your tone sticks out.
In fact, I'm so impressed I want to mother your children.
Over 9,000/5
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!! This is absolutely amazing! Please tell me there will be more then 3 chapters? This story of yours needs to continue, we need to see the relationship between Pyro and Rogue continue? I mean will they end up together? What are the consquences of their little one night stand? I mean seriously you need to write a whole story on them! Please oh please! I think you are amazing so please continue this story!
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow
I love it. Actually startin to cotton to the pairin of those two, but will still be a staunch Cyclops/Rogue shipper.
I love it. Actually startin to cotton to the pairin of those two, but will still be a staunch Cyclops/Rogue shipper.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I need more! I'm like addicted to this story...please...as soon as you can write more!!!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good start. Can't wait to read more!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it...I'm also obsessed with your other Rogue/Pyro story...can't wait for the next part...