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Aargh! I was sweating all over the place reading this. Do they realize it's Hank sitting next to them? And that was again a clever way to make Hank aware that Amanda might fancy him. Good job there! :D

um... yeah... I think from the first 'girlfriend' we all knew Dougie's orientation *lol*
Absolutely charming chapter *and funny as hell*! Heehee, *old soap opera announcer voice* Has Hank been found out??? Will he blush enough to guide ships in from sea??? Will Amanda figure it out??? Next time on 'Eye of the Beholder', DUNDUNDUN. *giggles* seriously though, I'm going to have to prop my own thumbs up soon from the constant giving of double thumbs up on this story...

YES!!!! Now it's starting to get very interesting. As usual, I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Ta for the shout out, and wow, thankyou so much for updating so quickly! Great chapter, and i'm itching to see what happens now that someone is clued in to the handsome gentleman who is the ded ringer for mccoy.lol. he oculd be in trouble. Love it. keep up the great work!!

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! I'm sorry I haven't had a chance to read the newest additions and review until now (bad me). I'm glad Hank got the jump on James, and I can totally understand why Amanda would want to get the hell out of that hotel. I doubt I would have felt very comfortable either knowing that a would-be-rapist with mutant powers of charm was in the same building. *chuckles* Poor Hank, I guess his gaydar was broken that night, or he was focused so much on Amanda he didn't hear the alarms going off. It was soooo obvious he was gay! *grins* I hope they make the connection with the sketch and him ^__^

Once again, fabulous, and i have been enjoying the banter. Henry at his most protective is endearing as always, and keep up the good work. I am loving this story!

That was clever. Now Hank looks like a hero in her eyes. :) I was also a bit confused about the chapter ending in midsentence but gladly you got it fixed now. Again please update soon!

Sheesh, I'm away for a few days, and look what I come back to! YAY!!!
I'm really enjoying this story and am looking forward to more of it.

This chapter was so full of Hank McCoy love that I'm too overjoyed to even say the dreaded 'squee'.
I'm sorry, but there's so few really good Beast fics that praise can't be given enough for the superb ones and this is truly having the makings of a superb story (even if it wasn't based on Beast -though that makes it even more sweet- it would be a wonderful story on its own).
As for James... omg he just keeps coming back like a little cockroach doesn't he?
I think I speak for all when I say it was pure joy to have Hank outwit him twice... 'accidentally' let his head hit the baseboard' *snorts, lmao* yeah, I bet...
Timing, dialogue, everything perfect and certainly cannot wait for more.

*brow furrows* um... was this chapter meant to get cut off in mid-sentence or was there a glitch, hon?
May want to double check.
ROFL *I wish*
dammitdammitdammit... must stop reading this when I am in location that does not allow me to snort and laugh like a drunk and rowdy cowgirl... I think I hurt myself keeping in the laughs with Amanda and Hank... oh pleeeeeease update again soon :).