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for Eye of the Beholder

by TheShadowCat

person Vixey
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh you stinking little...hey i can help it i didnt know who the silver surfer is. keep it up and no more cliffies like that please
person roni
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow you put in the fantastic four?! very nice. cant wait to see what happens next!
person onewing
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The Silver Surfer. I thought about him and dismissed him. I don't know why. Remy with the red irises? Hmm, I guess I will have to reread the XMen stuff again. Anyway, just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying this story.
person Arden
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic 4 of course! lol . great chapter, and her reaction to chopsticks is remarkably similar to my own. lol. great work, and i can't wait to hear more!
person Vixey
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The Fantastic four. human torch, invisible girl, mr fantastic and my fave the thing. love the story so far keep it up. i love hank, hes my fav
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, very cool reference to Fantastic Four. Very nice Chapter again. Please update soon! :)
person blue_lioness
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic Four AND the Silver Surfer
*grins*
Fantastic chapter; oh so cute and wonderful between them, but I do wonder when the mess is going to hit the fan and we see the return of the big baddies :D Happy New Year!!!
person blue_lioness
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... any chance at all the waiter with the red irises was Remy LeBeau/Gambit???
person amh
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have written a wonderful story. My only question is when are you going to finish the rest of the chapters? I can't wait to read more.
person onewing
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute, throwing the Fantastic Four in as well. :)
It's nice to see Hank and Amanda on a spur of the moment date.
I'm still not sure who the others are in the place, but I'm enjoying seeing all of those characters. Any chance you will do a Fantastic Four story at some point?
Anyway, now that you wrote about some of my other favorites, I really look forward to the next update.
Great job! Don't forget to let Beast out though.

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