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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi love your story and was wondering if you are ever going to update?
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey more soon please i wanna no wht happens!! MORE SOON
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! :D Update when you can ...I'll be waiting! :D I didn't notice any grammatical errors, but I was too concentrated on the story than the mispellings and stuff like that :P Excellent plot! I'm guessing next chapter might be on Logan...or is this all in Bobby's POV?
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I love this story, the emotions, the pain, the turmoil!! Ahhhhhhh, its better than Passions and the Young and the Restless combined!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i like the story please keep going and i was wondering if u could e-mail me when u upate so i know?!! please.... heres my e-mail Darklight2365891@aol.com please send a link and please UPDATE SOON!!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I'm loving this. Are you gonna update soon? Because this is making me all happy inside.
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far its so sad! Please up-date soon I cant wait to see what happens!!!!!!
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, the spelling/past, present and future tense could use work. I liked how your story actually made a story about the loss of their team mates. Most slash stories in X-men don't focus on the right after part.
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, the spelling/past, present and future tense could use work. I liked how you actually made a story about the loss of their team mates. Most slash stories in X-men don't focus on the right after part.
AFF needs a fix review button.
AFF needs a fix review button.