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by PyrosGirl

schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this the way you approached John's character. I've been reviewing all the Pyro scenes in the movie in prep for a fic and I really see him as being lost and hurt. Lashing out and looking for something missing. Maybe it is Bobby.

Good content, though it wouldn't hurt to run it through a spelling and grammar checker. I think I'll be looking at some more of your stuff.
person SuicideSkittles
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries, spaz, dies, corps cries more* That was so sad!!! *huggles John* I've always luved John even when he had a really retarded costum in the original cartoon! He was just such an amazing character, and the movies made him even better, if a bit emo. This though, I honestly always saw John being jealous of Rogue having Bobby then Bobby having Rogue, hell even my non-slasher friends see it!! You did a great job encorporating the song too, I love that song!! So ubber Kudos and I'd like to see a Bobby/John series by you, I think it'd come out great!

Lurv Skittles^^

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