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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! Its so incredibly good!!! *Sigh* If only your chapters would be a little longer, then I would be in heaven.....
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad yuor back, I love the new chapter. There are some spacing issues you might want to address just to make it a little easier to read, but other then that it was terrific!
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its great that they're together for now.
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm counting the days till your return.
That last chapter is alot like a nightmare
there at the end, but one that must be riden
through. I want to wake up, yet I know it must
be dreamed in order to wake up.
Oh my, oh my, oh my...
No one can claim you mary-sue now,
as if it was, a rape fantasy would
have been played out long ago.
That last chapter is alot like a nightmare
there at the end, but one that must be riden
through. I want to wake up, yet I know it must
be dreamed in order to wake up.
Oh my, oh my, oh my...
No one can claim you mary-sue now,
as if it was, a rape fantasy would
have been played out long ago.
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story gets better with every chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you had a good trip!
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like that they took her with them. It adds more to the plot.
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was good. So are they going to leave her there or take her with them?
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its good to see they're getting back on track since everything looks like its about to go all wrong.
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the nosy neighbor part but it was all good.
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eep, you need to go back and do a touch of editing on this one.
You have "He" quite a few times when it should be "She".
- or atleast that's how it reads :-/
Outside of that, I'm sorry to say I'm unsure of the history
you poking at here. Certain things ring with familularity,
but I don't dare trust that alone to go on anything till
more is posted at a later time.
You have "He" quite a few times when it should be "She".
- or atleast that's how it reads :-/
Outside of that, I'm sorry to say I'm unsure of the history
you poking at here. Certain things ring with familularity,
but I don't dare trust that alone to go on anything till
more is posted at a later time.