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June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update?
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May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There is no way you can leave it like this a kind of cliffie. Is she pregnant or not Rhayn Dude. Awesome sex!!!!! Keep it up and I just might like it.
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May 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEy I want more of this it is AMAZING. I think that JEan will do something if Ororo is pregnant. That would be mena but you have a mean Jean in this one. Keep going please. Love this!
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May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done. I must say the sex scene was EARTH SHAKING!!!!!. Write moreNOW!!! For some reason I dont see JEan leaving Scott or Ororo alone I think it will be even worse. Awesome fiction!!!
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May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was SPECTACULAR!!!. Write more of that stuff Dude Rhayn. I just can't see Jean listening to the Professor or Scott because she loves him. I felt kind of bad for her but she did blow up the Greenhouse and that ain't right. I hope Ororo is pregnant that would be alright with me. I love this fic if I have not said it before.
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May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have a question Who is the King of Pain. Is it Logan, Scott or Gambit? I am betting that it is Scott because he is giving it to Logan by sleeping with Ororo. BTW EXQUISITE SCENE !!!!!! I am still shaking that was amazing. I am so glad I read this I like the title so I decided to read it. Awesome fic I will continue to read it if all the updates are as body shaking as this one.
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!! That love scene left ME shaking. Oh BOy RHayn that was AWESOME!!!! AND she might be pregnant. I am in awe of your writing ability This is the best!!!!! and chapter 12 is second. BRAVO BRAVO
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was the most Awesomemist ( made up word) chapter that you have ever written. I am shaking after that. I know Jean is going to do something if Ororo is preggers I hopre so after that SEX!!!! AWESOME
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am all tingly and need a serious shower. That was MAGNIFICENT . I am going to read it again as soon as i am done. I hope she is pregnat so Jean can go somewhere and leave Scott alone. LOVE THIS FIC
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh YEAH!!!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!! Do it again!!!! Jean REALLY makes him upset and Ororo plays the price with every powerful thrust LOL. I bet she's going to have his baby after that!!!!! I am hooked again after so long YOU DID NOT LET US DOWN!!!!!! EXCELLENT