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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this very hot, very in character, and the description of the actions were on point. Be good to see you still write though. You have a lot of stories I'd like to see finished. ^^
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, haven't read the comics, but I don't care. This was great.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the hottest story that I've seen on aff, great pairing and action. Thanks for writing it and keep it up!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice fic my friend! Very hot and heavy Rolo action! Just the way it ought to be! I like how Logan made Ororo tremble before his skills for lovemaking. You showed her reaction very well and I enjoyed reading this! Keep up the awesome work my friend! This fic rocks! Peace!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, but it would be much, much better of you got rid of all the CAPITALIZED words and the *denoted* words. These two methods of stressing words should be done sparingly, otherwise it just becomes annoying.
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic was great i love Ro/Lo and then ending made me sqee with joy.
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it