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July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see how the rest of this storyline will go. Please keep at it. :-)
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review on the story that I am doing. Do you have anymore ideas on how I can try to improve the story because I am stuck right now. Can you please help? Maybe some of your friends can help me on it too. Besides I need some ideas for the next chapter.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ororo! Poor Logan! SOMEBODY KICK VICTOR'S ASS!!!!!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice! keep it up! update soon!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story cept that you made Vic a rapist...why can't Logan ever be the bad guy? -cries- I luff Vic! Anywho, update soon.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far, but I was just really getting into the O/L pairing when you had tragedy strike. Not to belittle rape, but that was a hell of a mood killer. I know the plot is dealing with that, and you are dealing with it well, I had just hoped for some O/L smut first (I'm just insensitive and greedy when it comes to smut). But the story itself is really good, just not what I thought it would be when I started it. Keep up the good work, though...I'm into it now and anxious to see what happens.
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm definitely intrigued and hope you update this story soon. :)
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyable story so far! Poor Ororo, I hope that Logan kicks Vic's butt! And I can't wait to see what happens after he and Roro get out of the infirmary!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...well I love anything with Loga and Ororo together, but you write well and you make me want to read more. Please update soon. : )
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
once i got my head wrapped around the teenager angle i really liked it .i also liked the Wolvie & Stormy pairing.i especially got a kick from the Victor / Logan rivalry. keep going!!