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for Hanging By A Moment

by marvelmaster616

person Agent-G
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18
Loved the little backstory you had and it was sad what Ororo had to go through but I figured something along those lines had to have happened since they only had Sarah. Nice to see now Jean knows she's in love now too I can't wait until she gets back and tells her friends she's in love, they're going to go ballistic.

Oh man I feel sorry for that one guy that was with Sarah, not satisying her and then running into Logan like that...that will scar you for life.
person Jenskott
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 16

I must your versions of Logan and Ororo were great. And theirs conversations with Jean. You have to love that couple.
person Jenskott
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Chapter17

You know I loved it. Seeing Logan and Ororo was great.
person RedPhoenix1821
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOA!! YEAH!! they both admit that they love each other but not to each other's faces yet, its good that they are taking it slow. I can't wait to read more, update soon!
person Jenskott
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Mm. How many times has Jean repeated why she loves Scott and how special he is for her? Mind you, I'm not complaining, but I think other readers can be somewhat weary of listening to it several chapters in a row.

Anyway I like it! It was very entertaining hearing Sarah talking about her brother -or listening to X23 calling Cyclops 'brother', too-. Especially when she's talking it with her future sister-in-law. Heheheh.
person Anon
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter can't wait to see what happens next
person Blossom
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been coming back here for the past 2 weeks reading this! Terrific story!
person RedPhoenix1821
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! Update, i want to see what happens with Jean and Scott! I'm a diehard JOTT fan, i want more JOTT!
person Agent-G
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17

I liked how you put in Rose there I liked that bit a lot. Loved how Logan and Ororo hooked up and I liked Sarah in this and how she and Jean are getting along. I can't wait to see what you got cooked up next. Oh and it's about time Scott admited he loved her now only Jean has to and then say it to eath other. I get the feeling this was the best ting she could have done going to his parents place.
person RedPhoenix1821
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH-MY-GOD!! What a wonderful story! After some of those chapters i had to go outside and take a breather and make sure my mind was still functioning properly. Update soon, i want so eagerly to know what happens in their relationship! I thoroughly enjoyed this story and i want you to write more soon! Please, i'm dying here to know more!

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