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Chapter 22

I loved how you did everything. From the beginning, when they were afraid and strained, to the declaration -It was funny seeing each one wanting anouncing his/hers feelings, believing all along the other part was about of breaking up with her/him-, to the emotions unleashed and the appasionate final scene -the chapter's title was really proper-.

I'm just glad of this fic isn't finished yet. I want more.

Finally, the way it's meant to be! :)

ok dude.. here's the deal.. every single title of fanfiction; wether its comics, cartoons, movies or whatever, they each have one story that sets it apart from the other submissions.. for the x-men evo.. dude.... yours is that one fic that is apart from the rest.. from your first chapter your story got into the characters lives and wanted readers wanting to know more..
the way you played with the lives of many fans favorites characters made it so that we can accept it and ride with it.. you adapted them so all of the x-men are there and fans cant complain about their personalities.. you played it off well dude.. there are just no complaints..
its about time someone brought justice to the couple i grew up reading.. SCOTT and JEAN forever damn it! screw grant morrison for screwing them up in the comics!!! bastard..... ruined the couple i thought would last forever and ever.. asswipe! i grew up reading x-men and always felt good that they were in it till the end.. c'mon! they even raised nathan in the friggin future for 12 years together! all the kids they had from different futures should mean somehting! fuckin grant morrison..!!! he ruined a dynasty!(MY EXTREME APOLIGIES.. i had to vent that out)
back to you dude.. great story.. UNCANNY.. ASTONISHING.. there are no words.. thanx for bringing back the pair i grew up reading to the pedistal they belong at.. the longest going x-couple lays in good hands.. write em well.. they need it..
keep bringing out those chapters.. and i know this is just wrong to ask.. but do ya think you could write faster..? :)

YEAH!!! FINALLY!! YOU HAVE MADE THIS JOTT FAN VERY VERY VERY VERY HAPPY!!! A JOB VERY WELL DONE!!

Well it's about time that ONE of them told the other how they feel. But I hope Rogue can deal with it too . But I guess in the next chapter we FIANLLY see Jean and Scott admitting their feelings for one another.

Chapter 21

This was an interesting chapter. I hope Scott and Jean confess soon or they're going to blow up. And I wonder what is with Rogue. Her relationship with Remy is a secondary subplot in this story, but you've got really interesed in it.

Certainly I don't want missing the next chapter. Keep on writing, man! You rock!

Chapter 21

This was an interesting chapter. I hope Scott and Jean confess soon or they're going to blow up. And I wonder what is with Rogue. Her relationship with Remy is a secondary subplot in this story, but you've got me really interesed in it.

Certainly I don't want missing the next chapter. Keep on writing, man! You rock!

Damnit, why did you stop here when it was getting good? :p Please fix this soon, you're torturing their minds!

Chapter 20

This chapter had nice fluff and a good sex scene. Well done. I'm intrigued for two things, though: Rogue's mistery and Betsy's attitude -I mean, what is her trouble?-. I expect you reveal the former soon.

And the comic reference was very funny. I bet not many Evo readers know about Quicksilver's wife.

Jott! Jott! JOTT! *ahem* Bring on the next chapter! And Pietro's comment that he was "too pretty for the military" cracked me up! XD