rate_review Reviews

A threesome, eh? Nice way to fix a problem, lol! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter ^_^

The story was terrific! You could 've left out the sex scenes and it would still be great! The ending was a little weird though, you know that threesome probably makes them fuckbuddies. Which means you could continue this in a new series and introduce Victor as a badboy love interest for Besty or Sarah and Besty could hook-up . But as for the Victor thing; making him an "older- man who seduces a younger woman kind of thing". That way you could have Vic and Logan already at odds with each other visa-vi Scott/Jean being worried about her drastic changes.

PS. Could you leave it to about ten or twelve chapters?

Chapter 27

Well I'm really glad that they made up and HOW. Damn I didn't expect you to actually go for the threeway lol. But damn that was a great scene at the end. I have to wonder will the others find out about this? Would be great reactions! LOL. But was this just a one time thing or...will this just happen now and then when Betsy needs that 'itched' scratched?

great chapter

This chapter is a little on the weird side, but hey, jott smut! :D

great chapter

Whoa-ha-ho! Besty's a bad BAD girl >_< new low for the jealous chick! lol, ::thumbs up:: hope to see another update soon!

One of the more emotional and powerful chapters yet. And as always, I demand more jott!

Chapter 26

Nice to see Rogue being so open about her ralationship for a change I bet that puts a lot of pressure off of her. Well there was a major blow-out if I ever saw one and a little bit a canon thrown in there since Scott and Betsy did have a fling or something in the comics once. And I hope you resolve this in the next chapter, since I can see this is the next major issue of this fic.