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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'll be honest, I thought this story worked. Those two chapters said much, and did it well. A few grammatic hiccups maybe, but good bones. Not knowing your intentions, but it just seemed right to me.
Thomas
Thomas
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear Link of the Hylians,
IF you read the story codes you will notice that there is an OC in the story. OC or Original Character means that a particular character did not exist until I the author breathed life into it; tus the need for character background
IF you read the story codes you will notice that there is an OC in the story. OC or Original Character means that a particular character did not exist until I the author breathed life into it; tus the need for character background
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, indeed... Well I think it's progressing, though admittedly it's not really advancing more than character history. I think you might have been better off publishing on FF.net with an R rating though, unless it's going to get a lot more graphic. Nevertheless, it's a fine story, keep at it!
~Link of the Hylians
~Link of the Hylians
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like where it's going. Are you using Teresa Cassidy? I don't think you are, if you need that background, please please contact me. I've been an X-Force fan since I was a wee tike. I don't think she gets used enough. She could make more impact than your current person.
Over all, though, I like it.
Over all, though, I like it.