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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmm, good story unitl th escientist came in. got a little rushed and well... okay, it got very rsuhed. the sicentist didn't make much sicen. prolyl would have been a good idea to split this into 2 or 3 chapters and get reall explicit with the beatings....
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was really good very powerful in emotion
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October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yo, shorty. love the chapter. Thought it was too dope for words. First time an OC didn't annoy me. I like this whole Trek and Logan gig. Prime choice. I hear you got another story so Imma check it out. Peace
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June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
excellently done, and very touching :)
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May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You HAVE to make a sequel! PLEEEASE! This is just too good to ignore!