rate_review Reviews

This was a great story. I absolutely adore Toad's character, and this really captured the real-life shit that he's likely to have gone through. I like the way you've written it, and I'm looking forward to going through your other stories.

I like this one a lot, too.

Sarah.

i thought it was excellent and well written. i myself felt sorry for toad. i know how it feels to feel not love, since i am gay. i think it was nice what magneto did. you should write one including the 2 color-coded, outcasts of both groups, Toad and Nightcrawler. not many people, for some reason, write stories about Nightcrawler.......just a little suggestion.