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for The Devil and the Deep Blue Sea

by Nemain

person CybrEmly01
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I had a feeling when Kurt saw her eyes flash gold that it was her. Btw, too much Het is bad for your
health. Especially if you're a fan of slash.

Yeah, the duplicate (and skip-age of) chapters is a bit confusing, but most ppl spend the majority of
their lives in a state of confusion. So no big. Not that it effected my state of being too terribly much.
(Self-deprecating humor. Don't you love it?)

I'm going to be wondering if that's supposed to be "affected" or "effected" for a long time after this.
*shrug* Nothing new there.

Anyways, it has been a wonderous experience. And no doubt will be again next chapter, which I await
with barely withheld enthusiasm.

Wow, that last bit is about as eloquent I've ever been. I impressed m'self. *long pause* COOL! *giggle*

Bye! *waves like an enthused 3 yr old*
CybrEm
person RayneSkye
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FYI, you have two of the same chapters posted twice ... the one with Remy, Belle, the , an, and the female stranger, and another one later on. It's kind of distracting.
person melissa
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Meredith! Love this story. Went here to re-read some of it, but I think you skipped a chapter between 30-35.
person CybrEmly01
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've got Queen's "Another One Bites The Dust" running through my mind. Probably
because I was listening to it earlier.

You're marvelous, and I hope Kitty and her lawyer(s) nail their a$$o tho the wall.

CybrEm
person Kakegoddes
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to pipe in and say I think you are doing a great job in this fic. I am really curious as to what happened between Kitty and her father. I really feel for Rahne. Church problems can really hurt. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person CybrEmly01
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think Theresa is using one of the oldest bribes known to womankind. A bit
mean of her, that.

Poor Jamie. I feel really bad for the guy. The opportunity for humiliation in
that situation... ...ugh.

As for Jono, yes very bad things. A bit anticlimactic, that. *giggle* Sorry, hyper.
Yup, if all else fails, blame the sugar. Or something/someone else. *giggle*
It'll wear off eventually, don't worry.

Your fabulousness abounds!

CybrEm
person CybrEmly01
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Priests seem to be getting worse and worse as time goes by. Breaking confession,
engaging in sexual acts, sodomizing young boys....

Yes, I know exactly what I just typed. It was rude, out of line, and not nearly as
tactfully put as possible, but it is true. Also slightly more crude than I would've
done if it wasn't for the fact that I'm seeing somewhere between do and and
triple at the moment.

No, that isn't an apology for what I said, merely an explaination for how I put it.
Which I also usually wouldn't do. Lack of sleep is making me maudlin. And wordy.

I don't really have to type this, as it should be common knowledge by now, but you
and your -verse are spectacularly brilliant.

CybrEm
person CybrEmly01
schedule July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sing-song* Somebody's in trouble! *giggle* I wonder who's got the most
angst after this one...

Okay, Questin: Is it technically possible to whip someone with a wet noodle? d isd is it a feasible option for torture?

No, I didn't ask for any specific reason. I'm just sitting here, sipping some
chicken broth -wonering why I didn't add noodles to it- when the question
popped into my head. It's just how my mind works. Stream of Consciousness
isn't just for writing anymore.

CybrEm
person CybrEmly01
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice. *snort* Like I expected otherwise.

There's a similar saying about Scylla and Charibdis, but that was mostly
a sailor's thing. Being Greek and all... Boy did I ever have fun when I
described the background of that saying to my mother.

Before you ask, I used it in random conversation and she was all "WTF?!?"
only without the profanity. It was more of an emphatic "Huh?".

Adios,
CybrEm

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