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well if your still looking for idea I came up with a slightly different version of my last idea. How about when the two women are done and the loser if gangbanged the winner is chained up and Arcade does to her like he did with Tygra and activates that pleasure function. So the girl that doesn't want to be fucked is fucked and the one that needs to be has to just watch and can't do a thing about it.

As for another thing, how about one of them is suspended and piercings are put through the nipples and clit and attach weights/chains to pull on if you want to get kinky.

Plus there has to be a few female villians that would love a shot at humiliating a few of them too. Selene comes to mind. Update soon.

All this time for a few pharagraphs? You really need to step things up but that was an interesting twist with Lock there. Will you be expanding on this more or start with the next girl(s)?

Well since Arcade like games how about two of the girls are placed in a room with a group of men (AIM, Hydra, Wreacking Crew whatever) and they have to get as many of the men off in whatever maner they want the winner sits the rest of it out cained up with a vibrator watching the group take the loser as many times and in as many positions as possible.

Hey man are you EVER going to get back to this? I can tell you kind of had more planned out but what gives?

Kind of wondering why you stopped at M's like that, kind of a let down a little. Ideas huh? Well...you got Tigra in this so why not have an Avenger villian have their shot at her, how about Ultron, I know he's a machine but if you think about it there possibilies like what kind of 'attachments' he could have, or certain machines he could make for a little revenge on one of his enemies.

Songbird was part of Thunderbolts right? Then why not have Baron Zemo have a change with her since she and the other formestersters of evil turned on him. Maybe some kind of bondage thing, you know hot wax, candles and stuff since his body is messed up.

As for the others...not sure. I mean you had Omage Red and Sabertooth mentioned right? Although I think they would prefer one of the X-women, plus Omega Red does have thos tentacles, if you've seen those certain anime movies you know where I'm headed with that.

You could have someone try and espace at one point and they get thrown into a pit with types like The Lizard (saw him get some action in one of the Spider-Man fics) Feral, Whild Child and other types like that. That's all I got with maybe the exception of Electro, I mean he could attach these eletronic patches on certain areas that he charges himself.

Holy shit. Only one problem...too short. More on the way?

Pretty good story for this kind of theme. Perhaps a too large cast, but that means it can be longer, right? ;)
I found the second half of the second chapter somewhat disappointing, I think because the theme deviated too much from Marvel. Having Belasco or Blackheart showing up instead of generic fantasy demons and wizards could have been better, in my opinion.
But the 5th chapter looks promising. Individual scenes for each girl seem a better idea than group ones, allowing for greater attention to detail. An I suggest having the Wrecking Crew visiting M? They could have some fun with her ;)

Pretty interesting. And I like Dagger. Is the next chapter going to be about her?

Wow, great story...please continue....