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wow.
this was really, really good
i liked it a lot
will there be more? it's excellent, even as a one-shot.

Very good, I love rape fics, and very well written too, I hope Kurt and Kitty can eventually make up or at least be friendlier, but if not thats cool too :0)

"O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!" Isn't that how it goes? Eh, I'm getting a bit rusty. Anyway, really really nice - I like how you add just enough darkness to the characters to make us squirm, but not too much to make us hate them. Who knew Xavier's was such a den of moral turpitude? Makes sense, though. Weren't we all brimming with moral turpitude as teens? I think the little intro bit about 'moments' also adds quit a lot of nice thought to the story. Since you haven't mentioned (at least I don't think you did) whether this goes on or not, I'll just speculate for a moment. While I always wish the stories that I like would go on forever, I think this one could stand very well just where it is. That's not to say I wouldn't be thrilled if it continued, but it does have a lot of emotional impact as a short story.