rate_review Reviews

i guess pietro is jealous. maybe he wants wanda for himself. i'm very curious as to where this story will go. i'm not sure i like how kurt is portrayed. at first i thought he was just a little boy because of his actions. well he obviously is a teen, but very immature and naive. okay, i can understand the naivity, but why does he have to act like an eight year old? hopefully the hot sex will help him grow up a bit. will there be any of the other x-men in this story? i look forward to finding out.

I like it!

This looks like the makings of a very good AU storyline. I wish you great current and future work to you!

and dr. frankenstein lives again. what kind of monster has he created? a very good start to some unknown, mysterious world you have madeu'ru're lucky i like your work or i would be disappointed that this chapter is so short. i know you'll get another chapter up in a day or two. i don't know how you can write so fast. you've mentioned that you write at least an hour a day. well i've managed to write an hour a day too and i still can't produce that fast. you must be on hyper time. anyway, i'm just jealous of your speed and talent. i look forward to more.

LOL.....I think everyone wants to start a story like that. ;-)