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Reviews for A Divided Mind

By : CorpseChild
  • From ANON - unknown on September 11, 2005
    nice story.I like nightcrawler the way you presentes him. I hope you don`t kill me when I say that nightcrawler makes many mistakes when he speaks German. yeah i know my english is terrible, I just wanted to point this out

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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 10, 2005
    Well, I hope you finish this. I hate to be left with a story full of horrendously stupid and slimy people.
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  • From ANON - Smoke on December 22, 2004
    I didn't catch when you updated last, but I think that you might need a bit more of a resolution to this. This is Marie's story, but the thing with Kurt seems to be hanging. Marie's part could stand another knot in the tie-off as well. I don't understand why Rouge didn't turn on her powers at the onset, other than the rest of the story wouldn't have happened. Your part about why she didn't reveal the truth sooner makes sense. I like this one. It also reminds me a little of a project I'm working on, so it was lucky to stumble across it.

    One really bad thing that you should watch out for. During the medical room scene, I was hearing your voice. The author should endevor to be invisible during the middle of the story. It wasn't so bad as some who sound like gossiping with friends, but it was distracting.
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  • From ANON - Madame Incognito on April 16, 2004
    Very well written. Kurt is quite ooc, especialy since it's movieverse Kurt who is more introverted and religious. Still, it's a unique take on the character. I have some problems with Marie being so helpless, but I'll deal.
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  • From ANON - ... on December 06, 2003
    This is a very interesting fic and the last bit with Logan and Marie is really cute ^_^ I like very much keep writing you are doing a great job!
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  • From ANON - Myst on November 13, 2003
    Wow, that was really moving. Very good. Non-con is usually a thing I try to avoid in stories, but you've written this really beautifully. One small critism, you kept changing tenses in the last chapter. Try to avoid this if possible, because it may throw a reader off.

    Yes, this is very OOC for Kurt, but you've given a reason for his actions which is great because then we can understand him more.

    PLEASE update soon!!

    --MYST--
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  • From ANON - XChick03 on November 13, 2003
    Great story and writing...I hate to see Kurt as the bad guy since he's my favorite, but I still like it. Add more!
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  • From ANON - Gabriel Malone on November 12, 2003
    Buahaha. Perfect - although I think Logan's a bit OOC with all the "honey"s and "sweetheart"s going down. Fantabulous job, update soon!
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  • From DarkLillith on October 25, 2003
    okay... i hope you can get one out soon... i really love this fic... and as far as that ass who keeps reviewing... he writes that on everyones fics... anyways keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2003
    Very good so far.
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  • From ANON - Gabriel Malone on October 17, 2003
    Bah. I've been reading this story since the beginning and have JUST NOW reviewed, and for that I am sorry. And all I have to say is . . . bah. But in a good way, as it's an EXTREMELY interesting fanfiction, apparently with an extremely interesting author. Thanks for the note, I was beginning to wonder if you really HAD fallen off the face of the earth, or something equally impossible. The information was good to know. And I'll look forward to an update . . . just like I do every other day of the week. Keep writing, you're doing a fantastic job.

    ~Gabby
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  • From ANON - Feathers in Hair on October 17, 2003
    *meekly raises hand* For those of us who've been good and haven't complained that it's OOC (or were at least willing to listen to and comprehend your warnings about such) can we get a pretty, pretty Logan and Kurt piece?
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  • From ANON - thedolphinqueen on October 12, 2003
    i usually stay away from non-con stories but i have to say yours has me hooked!
    when will you update again? also please do not try to change kurt , i meou hou have made us hate him and then pity him and hate him again so just don't make any QUICK changes. that is a mistake most authmakemake;they take a perfectly fine villian/bad guy and turn him into mary poppins in a couple chapters. anyway keep up the good work.
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  • From DarkLillith on September 23, 2003
    ohhh. wow that was good.. i'm all gooseybumps... please write more i really like this fic. (oooo... and read mine too)
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  • From ANON - EVIL MJ on September 23, 2003
    At first I had some concerns about the way you were characterizing Rouge as being helpless and allowing Kurt to rape her. It didn't make a lot of sense. That being said, I have been enjoying the story and look forward to the next chapter. I think chapter three went along way to help clear up any misgivings.

    Good work
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