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By : Messedupstories
  • From ANON - Dragonknight on September 04, 2022

    I hope we get more misty knight in future chapters. I really want to see her restrained in her hand cuffs as peter has his way with her.


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  • From ANON - Dragonknight on September 04, 2022

    So Lois has her suspensions that gwen is having an affair with peter. If she finds out it's true what will she do? Will she publish it to advance her career or keep it a secret as not to hurt/damage peters life and reputation?

     


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  • From ANON - on August 28, 2022

    Just reread chapter 3 and noticed that peter works for The Daily Bugle not The Daily Globe. I thought daily globe because of Lois Lane in the other chapters. Anyway I have a request...I was wondering could you include peter seducing and fucking old JJJ's wife(just have it being that JJJ married a youger woman but still older than peter is)? Reason being, peter was getting tired of being yelled at and disrespected at the start of his career with the bugle. This affair could have been happening for a few years now.


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  • From ANON - Dragonknight on June 20, 2022

    Great chapter. Thanks for the update.

     

    Looks like mary jane and Lois are about to start a intense rivalry for peters attention. Can't wait to see what kind of sex acts they'll do to get him for themselves.

     

    Mary jane and Liz coming to see Peter at the same time? Here's hoping it leads to one hell of a threesome with it possible being recorded for memory and later use when alone.


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  • From ANON - Dragonknight on June 20, 2022

    I wonder why you have peter tired and sweating after sex along with his girls. With his super human stamina and spider actives he shouldn't even be breaking a sweat having sex with them. They should be gasping, panting and out of breath while he's ready to go at it again.


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  • From ANON - Dragonknight on June 20, 2022

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  • From ANON - Dragonknight on April 04, 2022

    Just checked and seen you haven't updated this story seens june of last year really hoping you update it soon.

    And could you mayne add some more variety to the sex scence like throat fucking, threesomes,anal,maybe some bondage and peter being a bit of a dom with some of the girls in the bed room rather old or new ones coming in.


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  • From ANON - Dragonknight on April 04, 2022

    Great chapter. Got to see more of lois and peter past in college amd there conctant lustcfor each other. Also got to say not surprised lois tried to use sex to get a story out of peter, he better be careful around her from now on. Also hoping he gets back at lois for blue balling himlike that.

    Peter sure has great luck managing to be in MJ apartment when he randomly broke in. Luckly MJ took it well and he got to relive the blue balls that lois gave him.

    Also when are ypu going to include Felicia in as his fuck buddy? Not only would she make a great informant her being harrys secretary and all, she also hates his guts which is a plus. And I really want to see them have some kinky sex.


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  • From ANON - Dragonknight on April 04, 2022

    Great chapter. Got to see more of lois and peter past in college amd there conctant lustcfor each other. Also got to say not surprised lois tried to use sex to get a story out of peter, he better be careful around her from now on. Also hoping he gets back at lois for blue balling himlike that.

    Peter sure has great luck managing to be in MJ apartment when he randomly broke in. Luckly MJ took it well and he got to relive the blue balls that lois gave him.

    Also when are ypu going to include Felicia in as his fuck buddy? Not only would she make a great informant her being harrys secretary and all, she also hates his guts which is a plus. And I really want to see them have some kinky sex.


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  • From ANON - Dragonknight on April 04, 2022

    Great chapter, and damn peter sure has alot of confidence in this story, especially considering he resisted arrest and wrestled with misty knight. Would have been hot if he had gotten her cuffs and used tgem on her and started fucking her hard but chapter was good none the less.


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  • From ANON - Dragonknight on April 04, 2022

    So liz allen, mary jane,and lois lane appear in one chapter?Nice.

    Didn't really expect lois honestly but nice addition to the story.

    Glad peter is working for the Daily Globe and not the Bugle and JJJ. At list with yhe globe he'll get more respect and better pay.


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  • From ANON - Dragonknight on April 04, 2022

    Good chapter, liked how Peter and Gwen were having sex in oscorp right under Harrys nose.

    Felicia andbthe other office ladies standing around the vent listening and commenting on peter amd gwen having sex while wanting popcorn was kinda funny to me.

    I hope the guys who heard those moans were joking about it being a ghost or whatever because if not that's sad and tge ladies are right about their poor girlfriends.


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  • From ANON - Dragonknight on April 04, 2022

    Can't wait to see where this story goes.

    So felicia works for harry? I take it she's not black cat here or is she staking out tge company to rob him later on?


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