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Reviews for Caught in Her Web

By : MarvelFan98
  • From redsliver on February 07, 2014
    An excellent end to a very good story. I especially liked the ending because even if Peter has every intention of coming back to Jess and Carol, the Parker luck could easily lead him into a distracting fight with Mysterio. That is how I course to imagine the fallout anyways.

    The only constructive points I have to mention are the plethora of what look like auto correct mishaps. A beta editor would easily clean those up.

    It was a wonderful contribution. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Ratdogtwo on January 31, 2014
    Awesome payback. What a cliff hanger. Anyway another awesome chapter Keep up the awesome work.

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  • From ANON - Ryan on January 31, 2014
    Another Awesome chapter. Hope he gets them back for what they did to him
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  • From ANON - Harbinger of Kaos on January 30, 2014
    Question, how did he get rid of the handcuffs? And does he still have them to use on the two?

    Carol and Jess really have no leg to stand on, they brought this on themselves and deserve the payback, wonder if they will own up to what they owe him.

    Also got a pair of challenges for you.

    Think you can do something where Peter hooks up with Silver Sable and Black Widow after the arc where Otto nearly destroyed the plannet?

    Also think you can make something After Superior where he gets his body back but no one trust him but gets help from Wanda Maximoff as a person who knows what he is going through?

    Love the payback, hope to see the finally soon.
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  • From MF22 on January 30, 2014
    They have no right to take umbrage, as they did precisely the same thing to Peter: Tease him relentlessly, only to stop at the worst possible moment, leaving him high and dry. What's good for the goose is good for the gander. Maybe next time when they get the itch to fuck around with the mind and body of one of the world's most intelligent beings, they'll choose to just let things be.
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  • From redsliver on January 30, 2014
    A little revenge that leaves Spidey unprepared for the consequencesthe of his actions. Or maybe he's completely prepared, both would be great and in character. Spider's taunts in the boardroom are not subtle, I'd expect Tony to have caught it, maybe not the details but the situation.

    Another sweet instalment, I look forward to the finale.
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  • From AnansiScribe on December 04, 2013
    Been enjoying this story so far mostly for one reason, and one reason that has come into stark focus with this latest chapter.

    Spider-Man's epic revenge upon Carol and Jessica for fucking with his head like that. I wonder what you have in mind, though I would kindly suggest that he give them a dose of their own medicine --- tie them up with super-durable webbing (he can modify his web formula for that) and then tease them to the breaking point before leaving them to stew in their own unfulfilled arousal. That would be the best kind of revenge, and hell, they had no problem doing it to him, so . . .
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  • From ANON - MF 22 on December 03, 2013
    OK, now they've simply gone too far. A little teasing is fine, even hot. But this time, they crossed the line. Using adamantium cuffs and leaving him there, with not even his ankles uncuffed? That's just asking to piss someone off. And being that he can lift several tons, and is also one of the smartest people on the planet, he can be quite creative with his revenge. Control is one thing, but they essentially doomed any chance they may have had at a relationship of any kind with him. They'd be lucky if all he did was tell them to fuck off.

    Also, it's incredibly presumptuous of them to think that this can continue, especially when they laughed when they had the sheer gall to make that forgiveness crack.
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  • From ANON - Yup on November 20, 2013
    I can't wait to see how Peter will get revenge!
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  • From ANON - Harbinger of Kaos on November 19, 2013
    They made three big mistakes here they really shouldn't have with Peter:

    1.- They have gone too far with their games.
    2.- they pissed him off, as nothing is scarier than an angry Spider-man who is smarter and craftier than they think.
    3.- They left the handcuffs, they will regret that later on.

    Is the final chapter coming or will it go payback on Carol, then Jess and finally together?

    Will you do anything more Spider related stories? I was thinking you can do one with him, Silver Sable and Natasha, sort of an AU where they save the world, Silver is with them and feelings bloom between the three do to their experience together.

    Hope to see his payback soon, Peace!

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  • From ANON - zerorux on November 19, 2013
    Don't leave us hanging! LOL it was good, all 3 chapters are, but I'm starting to feel like Peter does.

    Please Chapter 4 posthaste.
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  • From AgentGv01 on October 05, 2013
    I hope that's the last of the teasing because this is starting to get a bit boring, if you have to do one more before we get any actual sex then I say this time have Peter turn the tables on them and he gets off while they are left frustrated which could lead into some actual sex scenes because honestly after that any man would tell them to get lost as you can only tease someone so far.
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  • From ANON - Harbinger of Kaos on September 30, 2013
    I really hope this doesn't end with them just using him that way and expecting him to keep taking it. I mean I don't him to force them and everything but I mean come on, he is one of the most loveable guys they will ever find and messing with him like that is just so cruel.
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  • From redsliver on September 30, 2013
    Love your work. Jessica is one of my favorite superheroines. You write well and carry the themes of selfishness and power play very well. I hope for more, and while Peter isn't known for being the coolest head around women I'd like to see some justice for him. Wherever you decide to take this, I look forward to reading it.
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  • From DSTorres on September 29, 2013
    Interesting story. For the record, Peter has known Carol since she began her career (prior to her joining the Avengers) so he saw version 2 of the original costume (belly covered).
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