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Reviews for Secret Bit of Right From Wrong

By : ChrisCross
  • From ANON - otaku330 on October 26, 2013
    HOT DAMN! I think I may need to bathe in ice water after reading the end of this! Great googly-moogly that was all kinds of yummy!

    I also enjoyed the whole Thor and girly drinks thing. You have a knack for writing the Asguardian and keeping him in character. Not a small task but one you do well.

    As I was reading the proposal scene I kept thinking *I've seen this somewhere before...* If I'm right, it was almost the same dialogue as when Charming proposed to Snow in Once Upon a Time. LOVE that show!

    In closing, I'd like to express my eternal gratitude and fondness towards you. You took my random story idea and brought it to life in such a way that is both awe-inspiring and inspirational to fellow fanfic writers. Thank you, Lady, you're awesome!
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on October 20, 2013
    I know Karen loves Steve and all, but she must be blind to not even bat an eyelash upon seeing a naked Wolverine! Don't get me wrong here, I love Steve Rogers--and prefer him over Logan, but seeing a naked Wolverine (ESPECIALLY if it's the one played by Hugh Jackman) would make my nose bleed. Just saying.
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on October 19, 2013
    Hahahahahaha...!!! Karen just whooped some bad guy ass! You go, girl! Aside from Karen being as awesome as ever, I thoroughly enjoyed the part when Steve set those idiots straight about TRUE beauty and disrespecting his woman. He may not be a super soldier anymore but he's a feisty thing none the less.

    I also enjoyed the beginning when you decided to include the Fantastic Four. The fact that Chris Evens plays both Johnny Storm and Steve Rogers was not lost on me and I giggled at the thought of them meeting each other. I can just see Johnny commenting that Steve is a "handsome devil" while Tony remarks that the two look like long-lost twin brothers. "Am I the only one getting a 'Parent Trap' feeling here?" lolz.

    OH! And I giggled at the part when Beast was all "Damn it Tony, I’m a doctor, not a miracle worker!" The whole X-Men/Star Trek Doctor McCoy thing was not lost on me either. Though I'm surprised Tony didn't remark on that.
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on October 19, 2013
    Thanks to you I'm now going to bed with "Straight Up" playing ad-nauseum in my head. Thanks for that. lol.

    Despite that, good chapter. LOVED Karen ticking off her guard. Though for some reason I imagined the guard as Zuko from Avatar, no clue why.

    Also, I've noticed that the last two chapters you posted required the reader to scroll the page to the right a little to finish reading sentences that went off the screen. I think maybe it was caused when you put all those x's in as page dividers. Seriously, there's like 50-60 of them! o_0' Might I suggest less x's? Like 10-20 tops?

    Other then that, keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on October 06, 2013
    Wow, you were right, that was longer! Woo-hoo!

    While I thoroughly enjoyed the Steve/Karen moments, they were sweet and funny, I'm left thinking more about Wolverine's weight. Given the weight capacity, how does he get on elevators with other people? Is he forced to use the service elevators? Also, not that he necessarily would, but could he go on any carnival or theme park rides without them breaking under the sheer weight of his adamantium skeleton? These are just a few of the random thoughts that go through my crazy mind on a daily basis. lol.

    OH! And thanks for the kinds words about that paragraph I wrote. 'Twas high praise coming from such a talented individual such as yourself.
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on August 26, 2013
    Awesome, as usual. But what's with yet ANOTHER cliffy?!? >_
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on August 17, 2013
    First off: Buffy rocks. Though the way she treated Spike after he went through all that shit to get his soul back FOR HER pissed me off like nothing else. Angel had his soul forced back on him, Spike actively sought it out! Gerr...I could go off on this tirade forever!

    Second, you are positively evil for leaving us with yet another cliffhanger. I believe the number you're looking for is 1-800-4SADIST. lol.
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on July 28, 2013
    *Nearly dies laughing at last line of chapter.*

    Lovely chapter. I adored the whole Rice Krispies drag-queen bit. Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on July 23, 2013
    Awww...I remember that scene in the X-Men movie with young Eric and his mom at the death camp. Damn Nazis, if it weren't for them who knows how Magneto would've ended up. I also liked the scenes in the movies where he and Charles were playfully bantering like the old pals they used to be. It's nice to see the softer side of him every once and a while, as he's usually such a hard-ass.

    Part of me believes Magneto might actually help Cap, but another part thinks that even if he does he'll use Steve's diminished state to his own advantage once he thinks his debt has been repaid. I'm also hoping Toad might be there, as seeing people's reactions to his appearance--and his tongue, would be fun to read. (Imagines Steve's weirded-out look and goes all fangirl.) Oh! And it'd be funny to see Steve blush madly as he sees Mystique walkout all blue and naked.
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on July 01, 2013
    WOO-HOO!!! UPDATE! FINALLY! ^_^ lol.

    Great job, as usual. Have to say, whole Magneto thing threw me for a loop. Can't say I saw THAT coming! Would love to see it happen in movie verse though. Chris Evans meeting Ian McKellen would be a hoot to see! Both such great actors.

    Eagerly awaiting next chapter.
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on June 19, 2013
    Any plans on updating soon? Feel free to email me if you want any help with ideas and stuff.
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on April 02, 2013
    Nice update. Keep up the great work! ^_-
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on January 22, 2013
    o_0' OH LORD! HOT DAMN! I foresee good dreams for me tonight. lol. As always, keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on January 22, 2013
    SonOfABitch! It was such another good sappy moment and then-BAM! Danger Will Robinson, danger! Oh well, I trust everything will be alright in the end. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - otaku330 on January 08, 2013
    Glad to see you finally posted this. After not hearing back from you I was afraid you'd died! lol. In any case, I look forward to reading the next (sure to be) amazing chapter.
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