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Reviews for The Virus II

By : Royboy
  • From Lightning on June 24, 2009
    Hey great chapter i liked the end of the chapter best.
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  • From on June 23, 2009
    oh okay NOW I know who that person was, the one that goes by Armor. I don't read much X-Men anymore (especially since they got Gambit and Rogue back together even though he's betrayed the X-Men twice to join their greatest enemies and Rogue said she was done with him. Writers really need to read past issues before writing)Anyways their scene was really good and I'm glad you didn't make it seem like the usual stale stuff like in the first one, this was a lot better and the kind of thing that is more fun to read as it's not as predictable.

    Anyways I was surprised with the Scott/Emma/Celeste, Mindee and Phoebe although it was fun. But you do know that Emma is the biologial mother of those girls right? And do they know that at this point in the story or are they unaware? Anyways I hope for more of that later on as well. Plus given that they share the same mind, shouldn't they have felt what each other was feeling as well?
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  • From on June 15, 2009
    I think this is actually a bit better than what you wrote the first time around. It's got more of a set up and the sex scene I think was actually a bit better. Just make sure you don't make the sex seem like something copied from a porno like most of it was in the first one. I have to admit I liked the Bobby/Mystique in this and I hope to see more of it. Maybe if they hook up she won't go bad.

    I have no idea who Hisako is though, was hoping for a more mainstream characters in this not the B list. I am wondering what you'll do, I'm hoping for some Julian/X23, loved to see Mercury get some as she can shape her body most likely outside and inside. There is a lot of potential for many different pairings.
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