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Reviews for My husband and my best friend

By : jaymclg
  • From shadowblade65 on October 25, 2011
    let me say that this story is excellent and am hoping you continue with it please. I really like how you developed the characters and i really like how scotts stick has been removed. I really hope you continue this story i am really liking it keep up the good work.
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  • From CassandraMalfoy on February 27, 2010
    Hope you'll continue this story.
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  • From ANON - martha on December 06, 2009
    this story is amazing. It's so different and it works so well. Please update it as i really want to kow how you develop the plot.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 08, 2009
    THIS is a great read. I hope there is more to it!
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  • From angelnomiko on August 25, 2008
    that was awsome ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Ellen on January 04, 2008
    Is this story gonna get an update cause I really love this story and would love to see how it ends.
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  • From bluemoon175 on February 26, 2007
    All I have to say right now is to please update soon... Please or I might start to cry. ;^( *puppy pout*
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  • From ANON - Nikki on January 10, 2007
    Where is the up date please i have been waiting for a long time nicely but please please come back
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  • From ANON - angel on December 30, 2006
    wow that was great i love it .. and why did they think they could come back and act like that ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now .. and a have a happy new year...

    angel
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  • From ANON - savannah123 on December 10, 2006
    I always look forward to your up-dates and I love this one to. There were a few errors
    but overall a great chapter. Looking foward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on December 09, 2006
    English teacher review: You have several words that are properly spelled, but misused. Lead is the metal and roll is the act of rolling. Also itself, himself and herself are one word, not two.

    Critic review: What's with all of the new mutations and are they really necessary to the story? Since when has Rogue been able to use her power to give something to someone else? The last I checked, her ability is to absorb powers, not give them.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on December 06, 2006
    Ok, your spelling has definately improved, but you've got some interesting phrasing going on here. 'Of a morning' makes no sense. Please remember that when a new person starts to talk, they get a new paragraph that way it's easier to tell who's talking. Over all, much better writing and it'll be interesting to see how the two couples interact before and after the audience is gone.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on November 30, 2006
    Ok, if you're not going to get a beta reader, could you at least proofread? I'm not talking about telling the program to check your spelling. I mean, reread the entire chapter. You'd be amazed how it helps.
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  • From ANON - savannah123 on November 29, 2006
    What a great up-date. I'a looking forward to the competition between the two couples and I
    also can't wait for Jean and Wolverine to show up.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on November 28, 2006
    Good sex, but there are so many typos that it's hard to ignore them and concentrate on the story. I strongly suggest you get a beta reader to help you out.
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