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Reviews for Independence Day

By : MopsyLemon
  • From ANON - maggie on August 20, 2006
    Really awesome story! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 18, 2006
    Hope there's more of this to come soon. You've improved a lot as a writer since your last Evo!fic and I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop this.
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  • From ANON - Jason Weaver on August 15, 2006
    Another good story from you! I especially liked chapter six. Now I think it would be good to have achapter maybe told from Logan's point of view. Simply because you seem to have him deliberatly distracting himself (Lots of comics state that the main reason for Logans bad behavior such as smoking and drinking and listening to loud music are really attempts to dull his senses so he doesn't have to deal with everything his sense tell him all the time.)Maybe he has a better idea of what's happening to Kurt and Kitty than they do.
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  • From ANON - Manda on August 14, 2006
    I really enjoy you'r writing. It's a little OOC, but most fanfiction is. Keep up the awesome work.
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