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Reviews for Erebus

By : DitzCat
  • From ANON - Nocturne22 on June 25, 2006
    O_O.That was my reation at the utter intensity of this fic.WOW! I love Chamber; there is no way he could be sexier and angst-ier! I think you did this exceptionally well, with the backdrop of Scott's neediness for psi-invasion a really nice touch!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2005
    Great story, using thewir respective powers to form a relationship that goes beyond mere smut. Nice job!
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  • From ANON - Catchfire on April 28, 2005
    Oh man that was just so damn hot. I'm going to be thinking about these two for the next little while. I really, really, really, really, (pretend I typed about a hundred or more really's here) wish that you would contiue this fanfic. And not just because I want to see them fuck in the classroom (drool), or over the professor's spyder (waterfall drool and there goes my cat running off before he gets completely soaked) but because I really think that this fic could go somewhere and oh man I just love a fanfic with tons of juicy smut and a nice plot behind it. You already have the plot set up. I call this pwp (porn without plot) with a bit of plot thrown in for seasoning. At the very least it could be a series of pwps following in the foot-steps of this one. You know a pwp with a bit of plot thrown in for seasoning. Actually I kind of think that's the way it should go except with a few scenes showing what the others think about his relationship with Jono. Especially the ones where Logan knocks him down at the danger room and where he notices Storms rain. Is Storm's rain because she is so upset that she can't control her powers? It seems to me that not only Scott needs this but that Jono needs this almost if not just as much as Scott. From the way that you portrayed Scott it seems to me that if it wasn't for Jono he would end up killing himself. And as for Jono I think that he needs to feel wanted. You mentioned that somebody could tell him that he is beautiful/handsome/drop dead gorgeous until they were blue in the face but that he would never believe them. I think that his life on the streets set him up mentally so that he feels that as long as someone is fucking him then he his wanted and desired but if they stop then it just proves that he is undesirable. So both need this so much but the other X-Men don't realize this at all. Although I think the professor at least might realize this in the back of his consciousness or something because otherwise they would find a way to stop it instead of ignoring it. I think that's it for the ideas and thoughts I had about your fic, for now anyway. I'm sure that more will pop up especially if you continue this fic (hint, hint). I can't wait to see more action between these two. I may even go and look for some more Jonothon/Scott aka Chambers/Cyclops fanfics to keep me busy in the meantime. Although I seriously doubt that they will get to me like yours did. Very few fanfics in fact get to me like yours did and I read a ton of them. So please, please, please, please, (pretend I wrote a thousand or more pleases here ) continue this fanfic. It's just too damn good to be a oneshot. Keep up the GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 26, 2005
    I adore Chamber!! I'm not a huge fan of Cyclops, but I still felt this was a good story, nicely written and thought out.
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