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By : marvelmaster616
  • From Jenskott on September 09, 2005

    Chapter 31

    I'm practically scared. What will Jean do now? Whenever she has one of her temper fits, things get wrecked. A lot.

    Poor Scott. He tried, he really tried fitting in, and they spat on his face.
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  • From ANON - PockyMuncher on September 03, 2005
    Geez! All I can say is...I know people like them -_-;;; I live in that kind of area and lemme tell you...it SUCKS!!! I feel for Jean, here...and Scott, having to deal with them...try to make them at least appreciate his existance ::sighs:: NOT gonna be easy. Hope you update again soon!
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  • From ANON - x00001 on September 03, 2005
    great chapter seems jean is a little happy can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - alrischa on September 02, 2005
    How evil and cruel her parents are! :p
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on September 02, 2005

    Chapter 30

    God, I hope they survive!

    Poor Jean. Scott is bearing the brunt of theirs attacks, but she's letting loose her rage.

    And tomorrow they'll meet Sarah and Paul. What fun... By the way, will the twins appear?

    I wish they can overwhelm the reluctance from her family.
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on September 02, 2005
    Chapter 30

    Jeez you really turned Jean's parents from what I've seen of them in the comics and what little on the show in really bad people. I mean they're almost as bad as Emma's family and that's saying something. Now you know how I feel about making characters OOC even ones you don't see often but I'll let it slid cause I know you needed her parents to be like this in order for the story to work.

    I really don't like the sounds of that 'more drastic actoins' part. I can also see why you had a hard time writing this, people like that aren't fun to write.
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on August 29, 2005

    Chapter 29

    At last! We've met the Professor and Erik, and we've seen details of Lensherr's household! It's nice seeing how everything are... hanging (I hope you don't want hanging ME for that pun! It was unintended!).

    And Scott is meeting at last his future in-laws now. Gulp. All I can tell is... Round One! Ready? Fight!

    (I've played too many fighting video games, don't you think? ^_^)
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on August 29, 2005

    Chapter 28

    Did they tell theirs friends then? Hm. I'd believed hearing a deafening "YOU DID WHAT?" some days ago, spreading throughout the whole planet and rippling towards the space void... Heh. I'd loved reading the reactions. ^_^

    And the way you set the next scene was downright impeccable. Very well done. It'll be even funnier now they're experimenting...




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  • From ANON - Jenskott on August 29, 2005

    Oh, Lord! This SO rocks!

    The chat between Jean and Betsy was really touching. And the sex scene was really great. There're very few J/S/B smut stories in net, and I wanted reading more. Thanks!

    Scott must really have plenty stamina to please two beautiful ladies over and over. Heh. ^_-

    One of my favorite parts was, thought, last Betsy's lines, when she's understood finally Jean's feelings and tells her friend she never lets him go.
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on August 29, 2005

    Chapter 26

    Oh, my. What confrontation. It really reminded me from the comics, except it was more explosive. Which is logical, thinking that Betsy was reaching her boiling point.
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on August 29, 2005

    Chapter 25

    Well, that was a funny chapter. And a good way of celebrating. I think you succeeded in satisfying all fans of the pairings.

    Poor Betsy. Pass that night of the year alone... that is very sad... It isn't a wonder she's so depressed.

    By the way... Allison? Like in Allison Blaire, Dazzler? She was a nice character. And thankfully she's right now in Limbo so nobody has screwed her... until someone thinks of tying the loose end Lobdell left, at least... which can not happen soon.
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  • From ANON - random07 on August 28, 2005
    great story..i love your stories even the ones on fanfic-normal...rly good stuff. how will jean's parents react?
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  • From ANON - x00001 on August 27, 2005
    great chapter
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  • From ANON - IVyZoe on August 26, 2005
    I love it! Good to see some Wanda and Kurt action in there! COOL! I know this story mainly revolves around Jean and Scott...but I was hoping for a bit more Romy! PLEASE! I lvoe them! Since they have gotten together they sem to have died out in the story, and I have the perfect suggestion to spice up their particular sotry. Here it is...I was thiking that maybe a teacher...or a student...could start harrasing her...but Rogue, being the stubborn girl she is wants to handel it on her own. Slowely though it starts getting really bad ...so she starts to pull away from everyone again...including Remy. Well...one day...BOOM!...she gets raped...by that guy...teacher/student, no one knows becasue she hasn't told anyone. I know that sounds mean, but sometimes Rogeu and Remy's realtionship seems purly about the sex and nothign really deeper THis way...Rogue become somewhat scared of sex and now we have to see if their relationship can survive with their whole dynamic of thoer relationship changed!! WHAT DO YOU THINK? Too much? Does it suck. Now I don't want to take the focus off of Jean and Scott...I like them being the center pf attention. Maybe you can have this going on in the background...like you did with the whole Rogue and Remy relationship blossoming and no one knew. If you don't like it...then that is cool! You probably already have this story written and finished. I thought I would just suggest it! If you like it then fel free to contact me. I don't wanto to co-write it or anything. I just want to know if you would use the idea. This story is ALL you and I don't want to take that away. Just htought I would give a sussestion...hope I didn't offend! duckducote22@yahoo.com
    ANyway...Love it! Love it! Can't wait to see what you have in store for Betsy!? Could Warren be entering hte story?!?! HMMMM?
    I lvoe Warren! He's a hottie!
    Update soon! Can't wait.
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  • From ANON - alrischa on August 26, 2005
    Poor Scott, he seems to be freaking out! Xavier/Mags was well done. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for Scott! ^^;
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