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Reviews for A Simple Mistake

By : smuttykitty
  • From ANON - sarafimm on February 09, 2005
    Not bad for a first time slash at all!! Very good action, but a little lacking in the conversation department. I know it may have been intentional, but Jean-Paul SHOULD have said something, anything, to acknowledge to Sas/Walt that what he was doing was alright with him. Yeah, JP could've "escaped" if he didn't want sex, but at the same time, this boardered along rape in my mind because (1) there was alcohol involved and (2) there was no explicit statement of aquiesence. It's a fine line and among m/m slash, there's a tendency to accept what normally in the Real World would be considered a definate faux pas. I don't want to discourage you at all, but a follow up chapter where JP says something along the lines of "no hurt/no foul" would be good. Of course, another chapter involving these two would be something to look forward to no matter what. ;)
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