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By : Nemain
  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2006
    lll
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  • From ANON - SG on April 12, 2004
    i didn't think it was that bad. i thought it was quite good, the smut actaully became like bonus part in it, like finding an extra five dollar bill in your pants pocket. if there was any smut. . . .sorry, i have an exceedingly bad memeory.:) but anyhoo, that was a really good ending! i was wondering how you were goingto just end a story in a chapter, and you pulled it off very very well. i think it opened the door for a wide range of storylines and changes. i can't wait to read the next sotry!!!
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on April 11, 2004
    This isn't confusing at all to me. Should that be a worry? 'Cause it doesn't
    bother me at all.

    I'd say "Happy Easter" but the ducks and geese would assassinate me. They're
    boycotting the holiday religeously. *giggle* Bad pun, I know. Couldn't help
    myself.

    Ja,
    CybrEm
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  • From ANON - SG on April 11, 2004
    aww, really? i thought it was a really cool story.
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on April 10, 2004
    wow. just ending it there eh? although this story was a bit confusing, i thought that was part of the mystery. once the pieces were in place things would start making sense. have you ever seen the movies 12 monkeys or fight club. those are two pretty whacked out movies that can really confuse, but once you see the ending you go "so that's how it went down. that's so cool!" i was figuring that this story was like that. yet, i also understand when a story flies off the wire on you and you have to stop and reevaluate things. i had to do that with my story i've been working on too. anyway, good luck with getting back to basics. by the way, what are the basics? lol.
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  • From ANON - thedolphinqueen on April 10, 2004
    I usually love reading your stories, I mean they are always the best ones on this site, but these last two long ones are ...well...have been really hard to get into. They do not have the same flair of your previous visions and this one especially has been really boring. I will continue to read your works as they have some of the best pairings ever but I hoou aou are being truthful when you say that in ch. 42 you will get to the point. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - otak on April 07, 2004
    I have ben reading your stories ever since I found this site a few weks ago and just want to say thank you for the terriffic stories I have now caught up on them and hope you post many more. They are truly excellant. Thank you Otak the Canadian
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on April 02, 2004
    Is it possible to be an Apprentice Fount of Useless Information? If so, I think
    that's what I am.

    Happy April Fool's Day, by the way. My one and only prank for today was to stink
    up my brother's room with nail polish and non-acetone remover. I wonder if he'll
    be high in the morning? Oh, don't worry, I aired it out some. Even though it was
    snowing.

    Anyways, brilliant as per usual. And don't worry 'bout the whole "confusion" aspect
    of the story. If some ppl don't get it they can just read it again when you've finished
    with this one. That's what I do when I don't understand something. That and ask
    someone who actually -knows- the subject matter.

    Sorry, been watching/reading lots of investigative shows/stories.

    Ja,
    CybrEm
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on March 31, 2004
    Yeah, but isn't Phobos supposed to be male? *muttering to self* I need a copy of
    "Who's Who in Greek and Roman Mythology" or something.

    Anyways, splendid. And, just wondering this bit, do you let your peeps get a little stale
    before you eat them? A friend of mine does. She opens the package and leaves them
    alone for a week or so. I've tried them, it's actually quite good.

    Ja,
    CybrEm
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  • From ANON - bluefooted on March 30, 2004
    Just wanted to say, this is my favorite of your series so far! I guess I just have a thing for weird metallic implant stories. I wanna know what's going to happen! I'm confused, but in a good, suspense-filled type way. Yay!
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on March 23, 2004
    You know I adore you, right?





    Just checking.

    CybrEm
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on March 21, 2004
    I just read the other reviews. The ones not mine, therefore not of much importance to my
    short attention span. Major buzzkill. (And here I was in a good mood 'cause I'm getting a
    poem published. Sure, I'm not getting paid for it, but you can't have everything.)

    I don't understand how people can get lost in this. It's more fun than the last mystery I read.
    And alot more difficult to figure out whodunnit. I'm engaged, enthralled, and all sorts of words
    that are (loosely) synonyms of obsessed.

    FYI, my last mystery was a Stephanie Plum novel. So called for the main character, not the author.

    And, at the end of ch 23 you put "Dolorously", is that the right word? I missed it the first couple of
    times I looked, but something was off. So I kept looking.

    Ja,
    CybrEm
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on March 21, 2004
    Your splendiferousness knows no bounds, as per usual.

    By the bye, are the critters doing Penzance again? 'Cause someone's a
    "Perfect Model of a Modern Major General" and it isn't me. As for the rest
    of it, I have a difficult enough time deciding whether a tomato is a fruit or
    a vegetable. Let's leave animal and mineral out of it, could we?

    Ja,
    CybrEm
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 11, 2004
    I just read the last chapter and I'm lost, confused and rapidly losing interest. Everything's so convoluted and bouncing around so much, with such odd breaking points that I'm really losing all desire to stick it out and see what caused the whole disaster, intriguing as it might be....

    bamfaholic
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  • From ANON - Michael Taylor on March 03, 2004
    I just had to chime in and tell you what I think... I have been reading Nemain's work for over a year and a half. A year and a half!!! I don't know of any other author who has been writing that long and updating with a new chapter EVERY DAY!!! As for CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, she loves it. Anything to improve her craft. So when somebody leaves ciriticism with no suggestions to improve her work and doesn't even have the curteosy to put there name on it, it's kind of hard to take it seriously. Despite that it is easy to understand how that can be upsetting, so Nemain wanted to ask some of her LOYAL readers (and there are LOTS of us) whether we thought your comments had any validity. I say HELL NO. But that's just me.

    As for you, Anonomous critic, I'd like to see you do better. With great sentence structure like "They were, however, honest and, oughought, at least somewhat helpful." and the use of double negatives such as "I did not tell you nothing but that your writing was script like." I don't see how you wouldn't be an immediate success!!!

    The simple fact is that when Nemain started out her UNIVERSE the characters were very close to the XME versions, but after over 13 FULL LENGTH stories and mamanymany sidflings, the characters have grown, matured, evolved, and changed. That's just natural, especially for a great writer like Nemain. I don't say it enough on AFFN.net because I usually send my praise directly to Nemain, but I felt it was finally time to speak up. Keep up the great work Nemain!!!

    In closing, as Benjamin Disraeli said "It is much easier to be critical than to be correct."
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