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Reviews for And Along Came Delirium

By : DarlingTS
  • From ANON - Andy on February 15, 2004
    I vote B, but make it so that Cate knows that Logan walked in so she making it more of a point a guess. I big fuck off tease. *nods* then later chapter we get the three some, cause well, it's just fun. I, myself wouldn't make the act of the girl on girl action the focuse of the chapter or the scen more the fact that Cate knows that Logan is there and the vorer part of the whole thing. (forgive all spelling errors -.-;)

    I'm really happy with the story so far, there's wit and something just down right funny with Scooters discomfort. ^.^ Keep it up! Hope you feel better and to read the next chapter. But if your still sick take your time. A story isn't worth you staying sick for longer, you know? Anyway, no more rambling for me. *waves* bye bye!

    -Andy
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  • From ANON - Nny on February 11, 2004
    Ok first off I love the fic and have been reading it from the begining. I'm just one of those people that is too damn lazy ever to review. and secondly, B! B very much B!
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  • From justagirlinmind on February 11, 2004
    *ponders* I vote for a variation of B! I think Logan should catch them smootching and maybe a little more than that. But nothing too hardcore yet. *giggles* Its good to know the Cate Rogue and Logan thing is set. I would be quite disapointed if it wasn't. :P

    Jessi
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  • From ANON - beezn on February 11, 2004
    I vote for scott walking in on them, make his head poke ake a baloon.
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  • From ANON - Foof 76 on February 10, 2004
    Okay, we can beat this writer's block!!!! I am definitely torn between choice B and D. (mmmmmmmmmm.....B&D......with Logan........mmmmmmmmmmm) Anyway, I agree that the steamy 3way should be a little later. But I can't decide who should be the voyeur. I really think that whoever spies should be driven to insane masturbation........I dunno why but I love scenes with guys rubbin one out. Maybe it should be Logan, cuz he's already in the girl/girl mind frame. He could see it and have a total thrill. It may be a bit much at one time for good ole Scooter. Although, since Logan is already in that mindframe, he sure as hell wouldn't sit back watching for long, he'd jump in just in case he never got another chance, whereas Scott would be too shocked and scared by his own reaction to do anything more than run away and spank it! Then Logan could hear about it after the fact, kick himself for missing it, and run away and spank it!!! See? Perfect! Spank away my good men, spank away!
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  • From ANON - star_of_chaos on February 10, 2004
    yay for Hershey's cameo :)
    hmmmm....inspiration.....how about Remy/Rogue/Scott in the shower? I'd love to see that trio; if nobody else does it I may end up writing iselfself.
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  • From justagirlinmind on February 10, 2004
    *drools* I love this story. I cant think of anything else other than I absolutely love it. Please post another chapter soon *bats my eyelashes* Please?
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  • From ANON - BEEZN on February 06, 2004
    need new chapter please
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  • From ANON - Foof76 on January 28, 2004
    Please update soon! I really like your character. I love how she is with Logan and Rogue, and I'm dying for her to defile Scott! Something really dirty and kinky.....blow his mind!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - star_of_chaos on January 28, 2004
    Inspiration, eh? How about Cate, Rogue, Scott and a bottle of Hershey's p? ;p? ;-)
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  • From ANON - Jenny on January 21, 2004
    Hey, great story so far. I always appreciate writers who are realistic enough to be aware of sexual orientations other than heterosexual. However, I have to say your character Cate, although very colorful, is quite a Mary Sue. Generally, you can spot a Mary Sue when more than two characters want to have sex with them. So far, Gambit, Wolverine, Rogue, and Cyclops want to have, or have had, or will have, sex with Cate. Unless that is part of her power (influencing people to be attracted to her) this is not a very likely situation. Now, it might make sense for Cate to be subconsciously willing people to want her sexually if she were more uncertain of herself. Somehow she could think that if a person wants her sexually than they want/like her as a person. However, you've already shown us how strong Cate is. Especially being so sexually . . . liberated. Still, I shall keep reading because you have an interesting story going here. Keep up the great work and remember: a reader's favorite thing is an update . . .
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  • From ANON - anon on January 17, 2004
    More! More! More! Make with the updates!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Karen on January 15, 2004
    Excellent so far. I like that Cate is not a Mary-Sue. The *loving interlude* between Cate and Logan was smoking hot. I can't wait to read the scenes between Cate/Scott and Logan/Rogue. I enjoyed this fic so much that I posted the link for it on the Logan/Marie Yahoo fic mailing list where I play.

    Karen
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  • From ANON - Foof76 on January 14, 2004
    Very good story! Now I need an update! I don't normally like OC's, but Cate is really believable. She's nice and wicked. Who wouldn't want to corrupt Scott and get nasty with Logan? I like it when female characters get to be as free as the men. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - fignuts on January 14, 2004
    Awesome so far, I would love to see innocent little Scott get his ass corrupted heheh. ANd as far as being awoken early, I tend to have a really bad temper anyways, and an *interesting* vocabulary, so never wake me up early if at all possible lol. You know, I never fit in with the *norm* wherever I went either, so she sounds a bit like me also. Especially with the tattoos lol. Would love if you brought Kitty into this ;)
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