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By : Nemain
  • From ANON - TKD on September 28, 2003
    I'm so confused. Trying to keep track of all the different plots going on is making my head spin. It seems like you could actually have turned this into two almost completely unrelated stories. I want my Kurtty back. ^_~
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  • From Nemain on September 26, 2003
    ***This isn't a review but a response to one (because as I've said befo'm 'm not so huge a dork as to review my own stories, LOL.) I wanted the reviewer (Anna) to read this but I could not get it sent through email because it bounced me repeatedly. This is no more personal than what she wrote to me on a public review board so I hope it does not offend... If it does, email me privately.***



    Hi! First, I want to say thank you for the feedback; I really
    appreciate it. And second, I apologize for making it seem like a cheap
    plot device. I am a survivor of years of sexual abuse and rape myself,
    so I think I understand the feeling of "too real", though for each that
    experience of having your memories resurface is different. I just
    wanted to let you know that there will *not* be a rape ins fis fic and
    that Amara saves herself... I will admit that it's probably part of my
    catharsis, having her do that. And I do plan on her having some sort of
    therapy because of the incident, because as you pointed out, she's
    already "damaged" just by the attempt. If there is ever anything in my
    stories that offends you or you feel is just plain "wrong," please let
    me know.





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  • From ANON - Anna on September 26, 2003
    I have followed your work since I first saw it on Internutter’s site. I have always end itd it and thought you one of the better fanfiction writers out there today. So I feel I have to comment on the direction of your new foreververse story. Even with all the horrible things that have happened to Kitty in your stories, I felt there was always a strong fantasy element to it. It is probably a testament to how good a writer you are, but the last chapter was “too” real for me. As a survivor of that, it brought back a lot of bad memories. It really caught me off guard. It is probably the most difficult thing to write in any genre and it pains me that many use it as a cheap plot device(mostly the 15 year olds on ff.net). I certainly don’t think you are, but you are entering an area far beyond anything you’ve ever written. I would never tell anyone how to write their story, but part of me really hopes you back off and don’t do it --even if it means a cliched heroic Hollywood type ending to the situation. Damage has already been done to that character’s psyche just by the attempt, so you really don’t need to go through with the hideous act to further any development.
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  • From ANON - cin on September 25, 2003
    awesome as always. please update soon. i luv your stuff. Lance will be the one to save Amara, right? gotta be.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2003
    good story - jumps around a bit too much sometime fol follow easily, but good anyway. Any chance that when you update in future you could change your summary to reflect the added chapters? With just numbers and no ch. titles it's hard to remember where you left off - so I have to go hunting to figure out what I read last. THX.
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  • From ANON - taekwondodo on September 24, 2003
    Love chapter 32. Great turnaround for Bobby's folks. By the way, is it me, or is Evan the only one who isn't getting any from anyone the poor guy?
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  • From ANON - sayin_gi ã on January 06, 1920
    More! More! More! I'm so addicted to this its pathetic really. I love your stories, and wait in eager anticipation for the next chapters. Keep it coming. Please. Pretty please. Look I've been reduced to begging. Oh well, long as I get to read more I don't care. So with that said, MORE CHAPTERS SOON PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - cygnavamp on September 13, 2003
    Yipee! You read my suggestion! (Does a little happy dance.) I think you and I are the only ones who write Togue. Or is it Rodd? I like Togue better. Both sound naughty.
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  • From ANON - Xandia on September 13, 2003
    Inteeg. Ag. Although I did find Rogue's "Cody was a jerk long before I left" (paraphrasing here) kid of odd, since in the one episode we saw him in, he seemed rather socially inept (he was a nervous wreck asking Rogue to dance, iirc) but then again, this is your own evo continuity.
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  • From ANON - sayin_girl on September 11, 2003
    You. Are. Amazing. Have I ever told you that, because you are. Seriously. I am humbled by your incredible skills. Please grant me the privilage of reading more of your amazing work. Please! It's like ddicddiction now! I need more! More Kurt and Kitty! More Remmy and Jubilee! Did you know that I had never seen that pairing before but now, thanks to you, I can't read the Remy/Rogue ones because they just seem wrong. Don't worry, I think it's great! Keep it up, and I'll keep reviewing and filling your head with praise. Later.
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  • From ANON - Li on September 10, 2003
    Finally someone has realized Colossus’s potential as a Kurtty villain! He gives me the creeps. How dare he hurt Kurt! I hope the big schmuck and his undersized member get what’s coming to him.

    I think Amara needs serious psychotherapy. The girl has issues. Poor Lance. I hope they pull through and whip out the candles soon. Smut isn't the same without them.

    Tabby has some issues too. I wonder what they could be?

    Looks like Todd has some interesting competition.

    The whole roadtrip to the concert was very funny. Those see seem destined to fight and cause trouble. Poor Warren

    Speaking of which, I didn’t know Angel liked the Sex Pistols?

    Keep them coming!
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  • From ANON - Cin on September 04, 2003
    thank goodness you have a new story. i was really begining to miss the "ForeverVerse". so far you have me wanting more. i can't wait to see what you do. update soon please
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  • From ANON - cygna on September 03, 2003
    Hi! I'm a big fan of your stories and I have a suggestion. Could you throw in a scene where Rogue and Todd have a little fun in the shower? On one of safe days, of course. I love showers!
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  • From ANON - sayin_girl on September 02, 2003
    I absolutly love all of your stories in the forever universe! You are a master! I bow down to your masterful writing skills, seriously! Keep writileaslease, since I am now fully addicted to your writing style and cannot wait for more! I love how you portray Kurt and Kitty, their relationship, and the way that they always pull through all the shit life throughs at them together! More, More, More, More! Pretty Please! With sugar(Or whatever sweet conffection that you prefer) on top! Ooh, ooh, ooh! And I totally love Kurt's family! I hope they come in soon! and poor Jubes. I must know what happens! Anyways, I'll be on the look out for more, and promise to review again!


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  • From ANON - Li on September 02, 2003
    Breast milk shakes?! Yuck! Stupid Evan. I look forward to the next chapters.


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