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By : taekwondodo

From ANON - LynziGraye on January 29, 2013
I am thoroughly enjoying this story! The descriptions are vivid, the characterization is great, and I'm really looking forward to seeing where the plot goes from here. One small thing- I think it's in the chapter "Into the Woods"- during Kurt's disclosure of his childhood abuse and Kitty's response, there's a side comment that breaks the mood a bit. It mentions that a line reminds the author of another show, or something like that; I can't remember exactly. I think it's just something that made it past editing. Love the story!
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From ANON - Kate on December 11, 2012
Please, please don't stop with this story!
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From ANON - Renee on February 18, 2012
I love this story so much please please continue it... It's the only story I've see that's completely balanced in all themes.. You are an incredibly talented writer.
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From ANON - Cassique on September 09, 2010
Hey there!

I have officially spent every minute free that I've had within the last week coming back to your story in order to read more! I cant BELIEVE the QUALITY of this fanfiction. I've been reading and writing fanfiction since I was a teenager-- probably more than 6 years ago. I constantly find a new "obsession", whether book, movie, television, or comic, and I am constantly on the search for fictions to serve my appetite :) Coming from someone like myself (extremely critical), I have to say your fiction has literally floored me. You have kept me in suspense! Reading your fiction is like watching a movie-- it is so wonderfully descriptive (not to the point of being cheesy and poetic), that I can literally "see" what is going on! Sometimes I have to stop just to think about all of the images-- which is truly a wonderful feeling. I only do that when I am reading the best of novels. Your writing flows extremely well, and the fact that you've inserted real German gives the story an educated edge that is delightful. The characters faults and annoying quirks make them intensely "real"-- unlike most of the fiction you get out there where the characters are utterly and completely perfect, and god forbid they have an embarrassing moment or selfish feeling. To be honest-- I just cant get over the quality of your writing! I LOVE IT! I could read you ALL DAY - and to the embarrasing lack of sleep ive had within the past few days-- I have been trying to do just that!

The only thing that I can say, is judging by your authors notes before each chapter, I can tell you dont update often! But PLEASE DO, as I am DYING to know what happens next!! Oh, and a side note on my completely rated R mind (and probably the most important - heehee ^^ )... more smutty goodness between Kurt and Kitty, please!! There certainly is something sexy about Kurt and that tail of his!!
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From DarkjX39 on February 20, 2010
Very good... although I hate the hopeless feeling of a good angsty story, I am nevertheless addicted to them. :) I did notice though that this hasn't been updated in some time... hopefully you will come back from your long hiatus. I look forward to it.

~Dark
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From Scorpia on December 03, 2009
Oh no. No no no no no. Please don't leave it like this. T_T
I want to know what happens next. Please. How do they get out of this?
I'll make you a fan picture of Kurt and Kitty if you continue this story, please.
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From pinkhare on November 04, 2009
this is an amazing story.
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From ANON - Lazy_Wolf on October 07, 2009
Excellent, thus far! I particularly like what you've done with Nightcrawler; rather than making him simply a caricature, as so many do, you've made him into an actually deep character, and highlighted on the Roma/Circus lifestyle quite well.

Thank you, and please continue! Is there any place at all where I could read more of this? You mentioned posting it up elsewhere...I'm quite eager to see that! I desperately want to see Kurt and Katherine get out of this unscathed. Possibly have a few scientists walk away from it dead.
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From ANON - tinisaurus on July 18, 2009
Oop, I'm new to the whole "review my adult story" reviewing thing, so I'm not sure if you got my email or not. If not, it's at the end of this fake review hehe. Please email me the status of this story, or if you need any kind of help with anything!

Again totally desperate ;_;

krissy1o@hotmail.com
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From ANON - tinisaurus on July 18, 2009
Oh god.

Seriously. Just, oh god. Where do I begin? When I found your fic and read it's first chapter I swear I had to fight to keep a sob of happiness and relief down. This story, it's characterization, the plotline, it's everything is just wonderful. I loved how you portrayed Kitty and Kurt and their building relationship. The best friends becoming lovers is such a hard transition to do correctly and you nailed it. The confusion of how the other is feeling, the anxiety that the "next step" might just very well destroy their friendship, and just-- yeah, thank you. Also not to mention the Kurt angst everywhere. I honestly shed quite a few tears from just reading! My chest tightened, I started reading alittle faster, and I even had to stop to take a breath after a huge climax happened. In particular I loved how you portrayed Kitty when she found out about Kurt's dark past. You remembered that she's a 16 year old girl, very young and very volatile to anything out of her league and just Kitty-- she didn't make the pain go away with a few choice words that miraculously would've been perfect, she gave everything she could to the extent of the only ways she knew how. You made her shine with her faults and I'm very grateful for that.

So yeah again, I'm loving everything about this fic, hell I even look towards your Author's Notes at the top. You seem like an awesome person, so witty and punctual and I'm seriously missing that. And that brings me to begging you to please update?

I spent a week reading this and to be honest (no offense whatsoever, it's actually a good thing: brace for mixed reaction) I wish I hadn't. With me, I absolutely hate reading such a.. a.. an unforgettable fic just to find it unfinished, not to mention to find the last update was from 2006. Argh, so that means you've given up on it? Sigh, after doing the math you must be over the whole Kitty/Kurt thing and moved on? Unfortunately for me I just got into Kitty/Kurt after marathoning X-men: Evo and it seems that people left and right started their love for Kurtty then left it behind for me to find and baw over. Anyway, I'm just saying that ... please please please update and finish your story. I'd love to help in any way I can: help with reformatting, fix the typos, heck even draw fanart for each chapter (if your still even interested in this story at all anymore)! Anything, I'm totally desperate.

Anyway I guess that's it. All of this was kind of brain vomit since the whole time I'm writing this it seems I'm like, saying goodbye to you and this fic. In the meantime I guess I'll look at your Fav Stories on ffnet for other Kurtty fics and hopefully they will be at par with your own. So please 1) finish your story so we all can have some sort of closure and 2) email me if I can help in anyway possible!

Best of luck and I hope you and your family are all in good health!

-Kris
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From ANON - interested reader on July 01, 2009
hey,

wanted to let you know i really enjoyed reading your fan fic. it's a guitly pleasure for me that i love to indulge in every once in a while, but i'm extremely picky and when i'm see something too long i look it over for a shorter ficlet. your story kept me enthralled and , from what i can tell, was written by someone who has talent and has spent much time refining that talent. it's got suspense, humor (very important), serious but not too much, and most importantly romance and lust. i must say that is the second thing i'm picky about; if the scene is too graphic (leaves nothing to imagination) it's just obscene, but your love scenes are just right. the plot takes turns which also very important, things hinted at in the beginning re-remerge later, you follow through. i hope to see what the next chapter holds in store and that you'll continue with this endevour.
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From SidhePanther on June 29, 2009
Oh, I'm sorry; I forgot to leave my e-mail address in case you wished to contact me. It's SidhePanther@yahoo.com; if you'd like to get back to me to let me know what your status with this story is, that'd be greatly appreciated!
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From SidhePanther on June 29, 2009
I found this story YEARS ago on fanfiction.net, back when Evo was still on the air (okay, so they're still technically playing an assorted, random bit of reruns on one of the 100 channels but that doesn't count) and simply loooooved it. These said reruns sparked my passion for Kitty/Kurt once again, and I somehow actually remembered this story and looked it up here. Yes, it's actually THAT good, that I would remember it throughout the years - me, who barely remembers what the hell she had for dinner last night. Actually, what DID I...never mind.

Anyway, the point I'm trying to reach here is - PLEASE UPDATE OR I MIGHT LITERALLY DIE! Really! Or I will at least be morbidly depressed. Sad, all for a piece of fanfiction, but it's the best Evo fic I've ever had the please of reading, if not at least in the top three pieces of fanfiction I've read, ever. I stopped reading "A Storm of Swords" to finish this. (a divine fantasy series, by the way, if you're into that) I could sit here and give a chapter-by-chapter analysis of what I love, and probably find a little bit of criticism (mostly a few minor typos, more prevalent in the latter chapters) but I'm too tired. I've stayed up well past my beddy bye time these last couple nights trying to catch up on what I've missed :) So...give me a holler if you need anything. Some sort of spark or inspiration to get you back in the mood to continue this (Gods know I need it for my own fanfiction), or a beta-reader, or...? Anything? C'mon, I'm a desperate woman here!

~ Much love and respect (and groveling), Kitty
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From ANON - MewMew2 on May 03, 2009
Outstanding job! Please update this fic again when you have the chance, it would be such a shame to let this wonderful piece of writing go unfinished.
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From artemisarrow on April 13, 2009
Love it, 100 percent. Your characters are deep and complex and you truly bring them to life. Your writing is truly wonderful and I hope you plan on continuing, but if not, thank you for the wonderful read so far :)
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