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Reviews for Playing with Fire

By : taekwondodo
  • From ANON - rubberduck on November 09, 2003
    well i must say this seems to be shaping up quite nicely. kurt and kitty are my favourite x-men in whatever form you choose, either the movies, the comics (all universes included) and the cartoons. you've managed to give them a few nice twists. the way this is shaping up with the mysterious organization wanting kurt makes me think this will be a lon long story and i find myself wanting to read the whole thing. it's going to rough waiting for each chapter. what i find myself craving more is eve everyone will react to kitty and kurt's new relationship. can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - Lady Flame on November 07, 2003
    What can I say... I've really, REALLY, enjoyed reading this story, so much so that I stayed up until 1.15AM reading all 13 chapters, even though I know that my alarm clock will be going off at 5.45AM tomorrow morning so I can go to work. Totally addictive, please tell me that there is more... *sigh* now I really, REALLY, gotta go to bed, sweet Morpheous calls, (did I spell that right), *yawns* so sleepy, I shall no doubt have very sweetams ams tonight...
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on November 04, 2003
    I LOVE this fic. And I adore you for creating it. I'm going to build you
    a beautiful frescoed shrine next to the altar I made for Nemain.
    (With copies of various favorite fics and scenes inside)

    By the bye, if anyone tries to outright flame you, send them to me so I
    can either beat some sense into them or rip them a new one. Whichever
    I'm in the mood for at the time. *smiling with an innocent expression*
    (looks can be so decieving, can't they? *giggle*

    Anyways, more please!! I can beg if you want. All you have to do is ask,
    or wait for the mood (or impatience) to strike.

    Thanks bunches,
    CybrEmly01
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  • From ANON - thedolphinqueen on November 03, 2003
    wonderful! that's all i can say!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2003
    I thought that this was well written, though the Kurt self-torture stuff is starting to get a bit redundant. And when are you going to make the commandos do something other than steam? Also a bit more Kitty development would be good. I just feel that her character is a lot more hollow that Kurt's.

    Thanks and I hope that this was helpful.
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  • From ANON - joy on October 22, 2003
    aw, the end of the chapters so sweet. I've actually been reading this story since it was on ff.net, and only came to this site when i found out it was going to be here. didn't even know there was an adultff.net before then. interesting...i love the story though. You have a great writing style and are very good with detail ::cough:: sometimes too good ::cough:: and it flows very nicely. It's a nice little tasteful lemon, not a full blown out hardcore porno, but the kind that makes ya feel all warm and tingly inside and wish guys were really like that (tails and fur included as well as charm) and makes you just go 'awww'. hope you write more soon!
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  • From ANON - ParkerFloyd on October 19, 2003
    Hello TKD! I feel so bad! I'm a horrible fanfic friend! I just realized that I haven't reviewed once over here at AFF.net. Ah yes. Chapter 12. The chapter that I've been waiting for, breathless with anticipation. Ever since chapter one over at FF.net, I've been waiting for you to really cut loose and write something so beautiful. After reading this chapter, all I can say is bravo! Writing smut is easy. Pornography is made every day, and cheaply. Writing like this, erotica, I can't even begin to describe how difficult it is for the rest of us. Writers like you and Nemain make it look easy, but the minute that the rest of us try we find how difficult it really is. So I applaud how well you wrote the "love making" scene here. It was wonderful. The story itself? You already know how much I love it. Or at least, I hope you do. This story is so different from 99.9% of the fanfics posted on any website, and its uniqueness makes it great. I have no complaints as far as form goes. If you miss the spelling of a word here or forget a translation there, well...we're all human. It's easier for writers with editors to catch that stuff. So I wouldn't worry about it. Anyhow, in summation, I'm really glad that I got on your bandwagon so early over at FF.net, and even though I don't think that I've ever told you in an email or review, I'm honored that you liked some of my stories, and I hope to one day become as fantastic a writer as you are now.

    Later,
    Parker
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  • From Nemain on October 18, 2003
    First of all...*love* the title to chapter twelve. Second, Fanfreakingtastic description! I feel so inadequate now! This story is one of my favorites!
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  • From ANON - Foof76 on October 18, 2003
    That was so wonderful!! What a beautiful lemon, steamy, sexy and romantic! I love the kinky use of his tail, but I really hope you explain soon why he can't handle her touching it. I know it drives him too crazy, but I wanna know why! Anyway, keep it up, that was amazing. (They need to have a few more encounters, especially one when she grips his tail right in the middle of it! I'm dying to see what he'll do!)
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  • From on October 18, 2003
    One word. Awww!!! That was so beautiful. I thought it was going to be great, but it was ten times better. I really like the way you managed to make a sex scene sensual, beautiful, and sexy without going into dirty smuess.ess. I love smut that has characters in love, I don't like it when the characters are invovled in animalistic lust. Love is beautiful and sex is supposed to be the same way. I thought it was cute when you had Kurt all worked up about hurting Kitty. That was great. I also like how when it was all said and done they both said that they loved each other, but neither of them were aware of it. Awesome. Keep up the good work!
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  • From on October 18, 2003
    When I first read this chapter I wasn't quite sure that Kurt would be the type to drink, but after I read it you had me convinced. This chapter was hilarious, especially the interaction between Kurt and Logan. I also like the way you allow people to see the side of Logan that loves and is concerned for the Institue kids. A lot of people forget that about him. He may seem tough, but he cares for them all individually. Like in last weeks episode Ghost of a Chance where Kitty has her accident with her four wheeler. Logan saw the smoke and hauled ass down to where she was.Then he threw his motorcycle down (his pride and joy) just to make sure his Half-pint was alright. He does have a good side and you portray it wonderfully. Well done!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2003
    Damn... is it hot in here or is that just chapter 12?!
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  • From ANON - Bleh \'N\' Stuff on October 16, 2003
    Happy birthday and great story. Frankly, I'm a little too old be be reading explicit storys about underage characters taken from a Saturday morning cartoon and you're too old to be writing them....you keep writing, I'll keep reading. Deal?
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  • From Nemain on October 16, 2003
    I love you, you know that? This fic makes me all...*sigh* Soooooooooooooo good! I love the characterizations!
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  • From ANON - Thanx4reading (that\'s my name on ff.net) on October 16, 2003
    Do you have any idea how amazingly good this fic is? Well, get one cuz it's really *REALLY* good. I'm talking professional-better-than-a-hell-of-a-lot-of-other-junk-I've-read-and-I've-read-a-LOT-of-fanfics! I'm addicted now. Lets see, that makes how many stories that I have to read everytime I need inspiration? That brings the total up to ...two! (And just ya know, it's the only X-Men Evo story. The other one's Gundam Wing)... Congrats on being able to write so well. I'm not sure if you already know this, since I'm only on the first page but to save Italics and Bold, all you have to do is save your story as a Web page on your computer. If you check out your Document Manager page on FF. net, then they give a more detailed way of doing it... Good luck!
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