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Reviews for Playing with Fire

By : taekwondodo
  • From Dvorchak on August 29, 2006
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update it, or at least send me an e-mail so I know how it ends. PLEASE? PRETTY PLEASE WITH WHIP CREAM COVERED KURT on top (or bottom you know your preference really)???
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  • From ANON - Kei-chan on August 14, 2006
    WoW...*claps insainly* that was one of the best fanfictions i've ever read before in my life!!!! And there has been a LOT of those. You said you were going slow and had too much internal dialogue but that's what good stories are made out of, edge of your seat,frauline! You never knew when they were going to attack! Please update as soon as possible! I really admire you as an author! I really want to know what's going to happen to my poor kurt and the others as well. Bitte und danke schon!
    -Kei-chan-
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2006
    I really hate doing this. However this story is far to convoluted. You don't draw the readers in because you don't have enough character monologues. To build emotion and an interesting story line yes you shouldn't directly say everything. But sometimes you need to state things outright. And shove your characters to resolve some of the mild issues to create bigger ones. This needs a lot of work. You have the right idea, but it needs some minor trimming. Good Luck. This wasn't negative, I liked some of it.
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  • From ANON - Stricken-Babe on January 07, 2006
    omg, i love it!!! kurt and kitty are my two favorite characters ^-^
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2005
    I like the story. I hope you update as soon as you cen. I hope woolvereen gets a holed of them.
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  • From Dvorchak on May 16, 2005
    YES!!! I started reading this story on Fur & Brimstone. Words cannot describe how ecstatic I am that you are now continuing it here! PLEASE KEEP WRITING, I am so hooked on this story!!
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  • From ANON - Yumiko on October 18, 2004
    Wow. That scen there with the proff getting all hyped up about being out of the loop sorta made him sound like a gossip loving teenage girl... And it still managed to work for his character. Amazing. Gimme your skillz!
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  • From fuzzybluelogic on September 11, 2004
    Fantastic story. I'd be more verbose with my review but I'm high on Thera-Flu. Really, really good.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on July 14, 2004
    I must say, a very weone one fanfic. Trust me, I know how hard they can be (have tried a few myself)! Right now I'm absolutely stuck on what will happen next. The only thing I think you should do from this point is follow each of the characters individually as they wake up, get tested, etc. Maybe you could try and have the four escape when they supposedly try to "breed" Jean and Kurt together. I'm thinking though that you might add another mutant character in here somewhere. Maybe someone Jean "meets" in the breeding area or something. They all eventually escape and take her (I say "her" cause I have an idea for a prospective character that you might like, considering your writing style) back to the Institute with them.

    If you would like to hear my idea, go ahead and email me. I'd be more than happy to help, even if my idea isn't appealing to you.

    Good Luck!
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  • From ANON - arachniphiliac on May 30, 2004
    WOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - WinterWolf on May 08, 2004
    Sorry guess i was wrong looking at www.ageofconsent.com the age in NY is 17
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  • From ANON - Yma on May 07, 2004
    Sorry for taking so long to review, I've been kinda busy lately.
    Anyway, I've finally got round to it and wow... awsome chapter. I was actually cringing at parts of it, just the sheer cold brutality of the army guys makes me feel sick and yet... yet... at the same time I feel kinda sorry for the ones that died... I suppose I'm just a soft touch.
    man manage to get a wonderful feeling of terror here, and of despair. The mention of 'breeding' with Jean is scary to say the least. The worst (or best, depending on how you're talking about it,) is tay iay it all sounds so very believable. I was especialy impressed by the relationships you develop with your OC's. In short an excellent, if heart wrending chapter, once more I'm sorry for taking so long to review. Keep it up though!
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  • From ANON - WinterWolf on May 06, 2004
    I dont know about where you live but here in alaska the age of consent is 16
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  • From sumthinelse on April 23, 2004
    Keep going!!!!
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  • From ANON - Queequegg on April 20, 2004
    Wow. You are so incredibly evil and so incredibly amazing all at the same time. That was truly an awesome chapter, you did such a great job describing the pain and horror that poor Kurt must have been going through. I can't wait for more, this is so so so so good! Please continue soon.

    Queequegg
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