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Reviews for Stranger than Fiction

By : wolfman182
  • From ANON - Tekkaknightrage on February 14, 2004
    Dude every time i read your stories they keep getting better and better. Keep up the good work! :) I look forward to seeing more in the future,
    P.S. More Leagacy of Kain abilities and action!

    "My path is forever strewn with corpses...VAE VICTUS!!!"
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  • From ShadrachVS on February 13, 2004
    Ok Wolf I finally got through it all! 37 Chapters in 2 days of good reading. Well I have to say you were absolutely right, It just kept getting better and better. The story has a good solid plot, the characters progress and develope throughout their struggles, the fighre gre good. OMG you got Logan just dead on man, That has to be the best I have seen Logan used in a Fan Fic yet. Even through all the action, romance, and story I couldn't help stopping at certain points and laughing.
    It is a rarory ory that can contain so many emotions and flow so well, the descriptions the attitudes, all paint the picture in my mind. I have to say Excellent Work, and KEEP IT UP OR IM COMING AFTER YOU WITH MY SILVER MACE!!!! :)
    And we both dont want that, You have me hooked; don't leave an addict hangin.
    A few little issues but they pale in comparison with what you have done so far... I noticed on the Chapters where you broke one chapter into 2 peices that you left your usual anecdotal footnotes off (no big deal but i was awaiting another possible humorous thing to read); The grammar and spelling have improved well, keep up the improvement (I know it is hard, you have seen how I type); and other than that this has to be one of the best Xmen Evo fics I have ever read, if not THE best.
    So I salute you in the Words of the Man himself - HAIL TO THE KING BABY!!!

    -Shadrach
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  • From ANON - Sarkywoman on February 12, 2004
    Okay, working on it
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  • From ANON - beason on February 06, 2004
    PLEASE finish this man, it needs it.
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  • From ANON - S.M. on January 29, 2004
    can't wait to read more,please update as soon as possible
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  • From ANON - S.M. on January 06, 2004
    can't wait to read more,please update as soon as possible
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  • From ANON - V on December 04, 2003
    This chapter is a bit short. There was more going one storywise in the previous chapter, and it was 5 pages longer than this one. You were doing a great job in the past 2-3 chapters to promote character and relationship developements. I feel that you could summarize or even leave out this chapter becuase very little really happened. Of course in terms of time, this would be alot for a days worth of events, but still couldn't we gone into the events of the night out for both the students and the old folks, thus creating leads to events that will occur in the next 3 chapters? I know your planning alot of big events, but this chapter feels disconnectery kry keeping it about the same length or just a little more for each chapter and if you dont want to give too much info about the events in upcomming chapters, you can always be more detailed on other events occuring with other characters. Jubilee is always good for comedic relief. If she was in the communications room, why not play pranks while having to waiting for a responce from the guys, or go through a scene with Evan trying not to stab everything in the room unintentionally. Another idea would have Cindy talk with Rhane and Jamie about her new friends and her thoughts on hiding her mutant side with her nonmutant friends.
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  • From ANON - Gub_man on October 10, 2003
    Here it is as promised.

    YOur story is going rather well I say, Going to mall and forcing one to try on underware has always been my idea of entertainment. I do feel sorry for the wind rider though. having to put up with those pesky teens.

    Hope the next chapters out soon.

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  • From ANON - VarioxDemon on October 07, 2003
    the House of Blues would be a nice place 2 visit

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  • From ANON - Gub_man on September 28, 2003
    Well that was an interesting unexpected add-on. Adding Cody into the picture sure does open alot of doors now. Makes me wonder if maybe. . . oh I don't know, cody gets the urge to come visit? start rufflin up some feathers, and cause some uncertainy ro somethinglike that.

    any way anothre great chapter to please the masses. Hope the next one comes out just as soon.
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  • From ANON - Billy Bob on September 25, 2003
    ur story rocks!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Gub man on September 22, 2003
    Well, there's been quite a few updates since I last checked. SO matt died, went to heaven, then came back to life. Kicked the Magneto and his croonies asses, saved Rogue and Got head. NIce. He also meets his alternate self family, including carla, (you just have to feel bad for her). Rogue and Matts relationship seems almost perfect, except for when matt gets the slip of the tounge. And that makes me wonder, except for the risty thing Matt really hasn't gotten in any fights with Rogue durning thier relationship. I mean they got in plenty when he first arrived, but since then its been all peaches and cream. Are you going to have them get into a fight about something, hell it could be something small and non significat. Just a question to chew. Other then that, this story is fucking awesome. And I dont just say "fucking" for any body. I hope to see more soon, and I know that aught to be pretty soon. Great job again!
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  • From ANON - Id on September 22, 2003
    hey id u d u 2 get back 2 me on my ideas

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  • From ANON - Sisk on September 19, 2003
    I love this story, but allow me a little constructive critism. Don't get offended, it's supposed to help you. First, get a spell checker. They save a ton of time when you're looking for your typing errors. Second, make better use of punctuation, particularly quotation marks, and spacing. Third, you need to work on your capitalization. Also, and this is really minor, I've noticed that you consistantly mispell some words (ie you always spell 'were' as 'where') which wouldn't be picked up by a spell checker. That aside, this really is a great story. Very well done.
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  • From ANON - Id on September 18, 2003
    ok i found my email adress and what someone said about u going back 2 your world would fit in with my person really well he can travel through time and the different dimensions
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