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Reviews for Something New For Both Of Them

By : LessaSolarem
  • From VictoriaValentineHighwind on March 23, 2010
    where is chapter 7
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  • From ANON - helena on July 05, 2006
    I have enjoyed the story i love scott and logan together they are hot.Dont apologise for short chapters,alot of writers do them and i loved the story.Now please tell me you are going to write a sequel to this as i would love to see logan comfort his scotty as he tells him about his dark past.One more favour sort that bitch jean out.regard helena.
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  • From ANON - Spazzi on June 10, 2004
    XD Gah, cliffhanger. :P *poketh*
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  • From ANON - Nell on October 22, 2003
    Hey!

    I just wanted to say this story is progressing nicely! Your lemon was wonderful by the way. I hope your starting to feel confident because you are a wonderful writer. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 21, 2003
    hmmmm....who has green eyes....Don't know, but they better stay away from my boys. Finally found some happiness so let them be. Loved it! Keep up the good work and loved seeing the improvement in the writing. It just got better and better. Look forward to more. Thanks for sharing and please share some more.
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  • From AngelRhiannon on September 27, 2003
    Awww... Scott's so adorable in that last chapter. Cuddly!Cyke. Gotta love 'im. Like it thus far. And took you up on your plea for email on advice. *chuckles*
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  • From AngelRhiannon on September 27, 2003
    I had to pause in reading for a moment to 'hrmph' at you. Oh, not a flame, dearie. Just... Gosh, I do so love Storm, and so dislike Jean. It just seems... Cruel and unusual to have poor Storm stuck with the flamin' redhead bitch, don't ya think? Yeah... *grins* End of 'hrmph'. Just had to insert it before continuing on. *nods and goes back to reading*
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  • From ANON - Darklady Erisa on September 20, 2003
    You do realise there's nothing wrong with short chapters, right? It's actually kinda refreshing. This fic is adorable - I know because I adore it, so hey - write more please!
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  • From ANON - nicien on September 07, 2003
    It's enjoyable, but feels like it's dragging.
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  • From ANON - Marvelous on September 04, 2003
    This is a really great, sweet story! I especially like how you took several chapters to build up the relationship between the boys before they get physical with each other; it makes every bit of contact between them much more interesting than if they were just boinking each other from page one. And don't apologize for short chapters -- it's much better to have you post something short than nothing at all. Keep 'em coming!
    (BTW, thank you for your very nice comments on my story. And you're right -- James Marsden IS the cutest damn thing.)
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  • From ANON - Lucy on August 31, 2003
    Whoops, something went wrong with my previous review.

    Anyways, you reviewed my story, so it's only fair if I'm reviewing yours! I didn't know you had one up, but I'm glad I found it. Don't we all love Scott/Logan stories? But I have to agree with the other readers, we need LEMON! Lol, I don't know if anybody offered to help you, but if you want, I would love to help you out. You know my story, so if you like the style, mail me at nickboyle@hotmail.com.

    ANyways, my only advice to you, is to be more sure about yourself, your story doesn't suck at all. Don't be afraid to write, because how else are you going to improve your skills? And don't worry about the long chapters, just because others do it, doesn't mean you have to.
    If you want them to be longer, you should try to write a bit more descriptive. Like what the characters are thinking, seeing, experiencing. You tend to write from your view, which isn't bad at all, but try to get more into the character's skin. Good luck and I hope that helps!

    Huggles Lucy

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  • From on August 29, 2003
    The obvious use of the title actually didn't make it that horrible. It reminded me of how much my fics always stray from their plot, not that they even have one... Plots are good. And so are longer chapters, but it doesn't matter if your chapters are one page or eight pages: it will always remain as gras eas ever. Although, it would be nicer if it was just a bit longer... Cliffhangers can be a bit nasty sometimes.
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  • From ANON - Christine on August 20, 2003
    I like this story... I really do... I wish you could make the chapters a little bit longer, though... Just a suggestion. Perhaps you should write one thorough longer chapter, instead of posting short chapters in a hurry. But like I said, just a suggestion...
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  • From ANON - RiverWhiteDragon on August 13, 2003
    Best fic ever! Lots of scott/Logan goodness and slight Jean bashing. Perfect! but..needs a lemon for S/L! Please write more really soon!

    P.S I read your other fic. Its really good. I'll review proper when I can.

    P.P.S Not off topic, James Marsden is definetly the finest thing ever! MMMMMMMMMM.........................
    Shaz.RWD>
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  • From ANON - lisa on July 30, 2003
    Good story!!
    but.....YOU ARE KILLING ME!!
    It's too short!
    give me more please~~please~~
    I do want to know what will happpen next!
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