Reviews for Just Gals Being PalsBy : DrunkenScotsman |
Oh my god, they were roommates! (To get the cliche out of the way)
This is a very nice tale. I can see what you mean about it being a palette cleanser for Diamonds. It's much fluffier at the moment and things go much smoothly for them than they ever have with Jean and Emma, lol. It helps that of course they are close friends to start with and things go from there.
You do a great job showing them as close, Tabitha knowing so much about Amara and how she thinks and reacts, while they are also so different. I see this time you've used the Comics' nova roma (never read any new mutants comics actually) background for her to accentuate that difference.
The rundown of Tabitha's background as you see it was very fascinating and does paint her as having great sympathy for the underdog and that she fucked toad and Blob was surprisingly sweet.
I was amuse Amara got the "most common superpower" as tvtropes puts, i.e. big tits over the summer. The other small chested mutants *cough*jubilee*cough* will be envious.
And of course the sex scene itself was wonderful. You always do such a good job of realistic, hot, smut without it coming across as "porny" so to speak. I love that Tabitha's continually reassuring and explaining and making sure not to push Amara too hard or quickly. It's so sweet and with her mixture of experience in general but not with girls make's it fun and new for her too. The slight uneveness in the pairing makes sense rather than Amara suddenly making Tabitha orgasm. So her watching Tabitha masurbate instead with a bit of snuggling to help out, and Tabitha coming just looking at her so to speak was again very sweet and hot.
Good job!
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