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Reviews for A Diamond in the Rough

By : DrunkenScotsman
  • From Daye on April 02, 2023

    Good chapter, things are starting to move now, It's interesting seeing Emma as the much less experienced telepath in need of Jean's help.

    Which of course, she's willing to give. I like you're Jean; she's kind compassionate and understanding but  clearly has thoughts, standards and agency of her own, she's not judging but she'll clearly stand up to Emma on what's right, a good mix.

    Noce job DS.


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  • From Daye on February 28, 2023

    Nice chapter, or rather well written I should say. The harassment scene seemed very real and it’s good character building scene for Emma to find out exactly what she can do with a careless use of her power.

    Her continued lack of understand that Jean is just a nice person is pretty funny as well.


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  • From Daye on June 17, 2022

    Nice chapter. Emma continues to be not very nice. Doing the right thing but for very pragmatic reaaons.

    Jean is much nicer and more trusting it seems, sharing info with Emma because they're both mutants, though she's no stranger to "evil" mutants, I wonder if it's going to backfire on her with Emma. 

    Good work :)


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  • From marvelmaster616 on May 02, 2022

    Nice start to the story! I'm liking how you're setting this up, making Emma Frost around the same age as Jean and Scott. Then, putting her in the same college. She's not yet the ruthless White Queen. But the influences are definitely there, given the references to her family. I can tell you've done your research. And I'm very much looking forward to seeing how this plays out. Keep up the good work!

    MarvelMaster616


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  • From Daye on April 30, 2022

    Oh this is a nice start. I've not read a lot of Emma Frost comics, so I'm all at sea here but I think you establish a character for her well, she's kind of an unpleasant person but it's also obvious why with the expectations heaped upon her.

    And Jean's there as well. Given we know Evo Jean did end up being a phoenix that imagery there when Emma touches her mind is particularly intriquing.


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