Reviews for Parker and Stacy(s)By : Messedupstories |
Damn does Peter intend to get all his girls pregnant at once?! He's going to be blowing through all that stolen money soon preparing for kids and taking care of the women. By the way, exactly how much money did they steal?
Jasmine's husband should be suspicious of her by now. I wonder how much longer she can keep tge affair a secret.
So now after all the build up we're finally getting to see Peter fuck Rio. Here's hoping he fucks her good.
So Silver blackmailed him with his book of secret sex fantasies? I wonder what they are besides his desire to apparently be bond and dominated by one of his lovers.
Its kind of amusing that Gwen is jealoud of Peter fucking her mom when she's tge one who calked him to do it. I guess he's going to have to pay extea attention to her from now on, though that just means more sex.
Rio has been shown again but no sex involved. I have to say, this has got to be the longest build up toward sex in this story, most of the time it's meet and fuck. At this rate she'll fall completely in love and be dependent on him long before the sex starts. Honestly can't wait till they finally get to it.
Can't wait for rio morales and misty knight to finallyCan't wait for rio morales and misty knight to finally get there turn get there turn.
Great chapter, things are progressing nicely. Can't wait for the spin offs and sequel to see what they entail,
Great chapter as always.
That last part surprised me though. He had a daughter in his dream world, with who?
Also can you update your other story Old Rivals or have you canceled that?
Great to see you'll be adding Rio Morales to the mix. She doesn't get anywhere near enough use in smut and it looks like Peter agrees. I can't wait for Peter to pound her hard, get her hooked on his cock, and knock her up.
You never disappoint!
Hot. I hope to see a threesome between Peter/Gwen and MJ. Both of them competing for how dirty and hard they can fuck Peter.
I liked the parts with Natasha and MJ in this chapter but I feel like the rest is getting kinda repetitive. Peter goes to one woman and screws and then just makes his way through the list. Also, his demeanour and attitude changes between controlling and dominant to submissive like when he talked with Jessica Jones. He's shy about asking for her services but casually whips out his cock.
I really like this story but I think there should be a little more advancement. Maybe have the women come together to have more threesomes and foursomes with Peter. If Gwen is his main girl then maybe she should also be having sex with Natasha and Peter. Maybe both May and Helen can fuck Peter together or Peter, Gwen, May and Helen can have a foursome. Maybe Gwen can be the one filming Peter fucking her friends idk, but I feel like she should be joining him as he builds his harem as his partner basically. That way she can make sure that she remains the top dog.
Another thought is to change up the sex scenes and sex positions to have some more variety. I love how many sex scenes there are in this story but it would be nice to see more things like blowjobs, tit fucks, anal, cum shots and different positions than just from behind or missionary.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
More forced graphically
Need more forceful things....more vulgar
That was hot! I hope Peter chooses Gwen over Helen, Gwen is better anyway. Although, I do hope to see some serious hardcore incest between Gwen and Helen in the future. I can't wait for more May content though, I hope there's lots of hard fucking and anal and super dirty sex between the three of them next chapter. Maybe MJ walks in and joins them mid fuck cause it's been a while since we've seen her. Keep up the great work!
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