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Reviews for The Second First Time

By : marvelmaster616
  • From DrunkenScotsman on December 02, 2018

    Best moment in this story:

    “It’s okay, Scott,” Jean said, still smiling as she caressed his face. “With me, it’s the thoughts that count. And yours, like you, are beautiful.”

    ‘Hey! You stole that from me.’

     

    I laughed a lot. "With me, it's the thought that counts; and yours, like you, are beautiful" is one of my favorite lines ever, one that truly encapsulates Scott and Jean's unique relationship. And you took it and made it even more special in the context of this story. Kudos!

    Addendum: I also really liked how you used the lotus position to finish. It's my favorite IRL, so I'm glad you included it; and it's also one that you haven't used often in your writing, so I want to give you your due credit for stretching yourself artistically.


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