Reviews for Up All Night To Get LokiBy : Artemis_Wilde |
Please put up the next chapter soon oh my goodness I didn't realize there were only this many and now I'm dying for the next one
I have enjoyed this story please update soon
First of all I just want to say that I was completely blown away by this awesome story of yours, it’s truly a master piece, I think. I loved everything from the plot, to the awesome character portrayal and character interaction between Darcy and Loki, because that was kind of out of this world awesomeness, not kidding, laughs!
They were both so much in character it was almost uncanny/a little scary; it really felt like how they’d have interacted with each other had they met in the movies, with the exception of the final Thor movie Ragnarok, obviously because we haven’t seen it yet! I haven’t read the comics, so I wouldn’t know if they do meet in Ragnarok, I’m just saying this in case you have read the comics and do know whether or not they do meet in the final installment of the movie series!
Anyway on with review shall we, laughs! Everything’s extremely well written and the humor was hilarious, more so, the smut was beyond exceptional in my book, especially in the regards it being a story with a heterosexual pairing, mainly because I’ve for the last several years read mostly slash/yaoi stories.
I noticed that you’d written at the end of chapter three that you only had one chapter left and that you had ideas for a sequel (which I think sounds great, I‘d so love to read more!), and also that you sadly only had gotten one review for this amazing story, which is really sad, because it deserves so much more, honestly!
Just a tip, because I saw that you haven’t posted this story on either fanfiction.net and AO3 (Archive of Our Own), I googled it because that’s how desperately I wanted to read more, so I thought that you perhaps had it posted somewhere else, and I must say I was a little disappointed to learn that it wasn’t so!
Hence me, writing this and advising you to post this story on both of the aforementioned sites, because that way you might get more readers and reviewers, which in turn hopefully gets you to write more, fingers crossed, laughs!
In the meantime, thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us, kudos!
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