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From ANON - Terego on August 31, 2014
Loyal fan here, what's AO3? Also, loving your stories, still :)
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From ANON - Leeslane on August 31, 2014
Really? This was the place where I found this story. Maybe it's the length.
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From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2014
Re: Chapter 10

That went...in a much different direction that I thought it would.O_o
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From AnansiScribe on May 27, 2014
Two things I took from this.

1: A fragment of the Venom suit/symbiote has been lying dormant inside Peter all this time and is exerting its influence more subtly instead of just trying to make him flip out and kill/eat things so it can get what it needs.

2: For a story that started so sexy (and still is), this sure as hell has gotten serious, what with Magneto outright killing Xavier at the end of this chapter. Wonder how Cyclops is gonna react, not to mention kudos for reminding us all that Ultimate Magneto is a hardcore monster compared to the rather noble and all-too-tragic villain he's portrayed as since Chris Claremont got his hooks on the X-Men franchise. I'm thinking that even if Cyclops realizes Magneto's gone too far and defects from his side to try to avenge Xavier, he'll either be dead at Magneto's hands in short order or he'll be shunned by the X-Men, Jean Grey especially, for joining Xavier's murderer in the first place.
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From ANON - Terego on May 26, 2014
I really do like the story and all, it is competent and has lots of twists and turns, but man, the name of it is sort of bringing me out of the "This is a serious story" mood. Especially after the last one! I mean, they're both great, but, uh, yeah!
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From MF22 on April 12, 2014
I just started reading the fic, and it's pretty cool. Although I could've done without the monster/Jean bit (Wolverine.) It was SOMEWHAT mitigated by Peter being in Wolverine's body, but it was still the monster's body nonetheless. As you can see, I'm clearly not a Wolverine fan at all.
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From AnansiScribe on April 10, 2014
And this keeps getting better and better, or hotter and hotter. Peter-in-Wolverine and Dazzler going at it . . . quite the unexpected treat, especially for the banter and Peter being unable to turn his geek off (imagining it in Steve Blum's Wolverine voice makes it even funnier). Also, I don't blame him for wanting another piece of Jean; who wouldn't? Oh, and Wolverine-in-Peter going out into the fray as a leather-clad Spider-Man, confronting the Kravinoff mother-daughter tag-team? That sounds like it's going to be a bag of laughs, although Peter will have a lot to deal with when he comes back to his body, given all the crap Logan's done to and in it. Great work so far. Be a wonder if I ever get enough.
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From ANON - Terego on April 09, 2014
Awesome show so far. Some of that last chapter is a bit contrived/obvious, but not actually bad at all. More to come, I hope :)
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From ANON - gnome_man on April 08, 2014
Zev is doing a great job with this story. I'm very interested in where it is going and the sex is hot. Peter Parker, Sue Storm, Logan, Jean Grey, all characters are well delineated, believable and the kind of people that you can get your teeth into. Sue's dalliance with Peter is a sad commentary on her life as a super-nerd's wife, but is something that I can understand happening, given her circumstances. I can sympathize with her. The sex with Jean Grey could have been more detailed, but the space required would have been too great. Still, given that, it was hot stuff.

Great Storyline going here.
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From AnansiScribe on March 22, 2014
That was fun. I don't know whether to say that Peter's a lucky son of a bitch, or a poor son of a bitch. Former for getting it on with Jean Grey, even if in Wolverine's body and learning a thing or two about pleasuring a woman thanks to her telepathy. Latter for Logan fucking up his not-exactly-a-relationship with Sue, and the fallout from when he gets back to his body to deal with that . . . not to mention having to fight an angry ex-boyfriend with optic blasts in the follow-up to this. On a side note, Felicia, Silver Sable, Elektra, Mary Jane, and Gwen all semi-simultaneously masturbating to the live feed of Peter-as-Wolverine putting on a show with Jean and Mary Jane and Gwen discovering or exploring their bisexuality in the process thereof . . . awesome. Very fucking awesome. Gonna be seriously embarrassing --- and maybe arousing, too --- when Peter finds out that his two closest female companions were masturbating together to him doing it with Jean Grey, even if it wasn't exactly his body. Will be looking forward to how you follow this up.
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From ANON - gnome_man on March 21, 2014
You know, it's hard to know when you've run into a real talent sometimes. They can sneak up on you and then they're there.

Zev95 isn't that kind of talent. Zev95 showed up one day and wowed me. She(?) has a true skill at writing, at pacing, at erotica. Her people seem genuine and flawed, like we all are. She can do the same character in two entirely different settings, such as this Sue Richards and another Sue Richards (the same one, perhaps) in her four-part Corruption series. So very different, and so very similar. I really can't separate them clearly, but they seem entirely different. It is the concept of "The Many Faces of Dr. Lao," a book printed in the early 'seventies. We all present a different face to each person we know, and this isn't a bad thing. Each of us is different, as much because the people we interact with are different, and see us in different lights, as anything.

And this "Sue Richards" is so VERY different from the other one from Zev's "Corruption" series, which I do recommend for those who are interested in BDSM and such, as well.

Two different iterations of one woman. So clear, so clean and so sexy.

Six stars if I could.
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From ANON - anonymous on March 19, 2014
I don't know if you've done it yet or implied it, but I know you have mentioned Peter's Spider Strength. Taking that into account I have to wonder are you ever going to have him take advantage of his wall crawling ability to sexually stimulate Sue. In the latest chapter Sue was getting a massage from him and asked him to put more strength behind it and I wonder why he didn't take advantage of his wall crawling ability. Sue also mentioned that he has only ever accidentally gotten her off and you more than implied that Peter has fingered her before and I can't help but wonder considering how smart Peter is and the fact that he is a teenager one would think he would have used his wall crawling ability while fingering her. Hell I know if I had the ability that I would use it when massaging her breast's, pinching her nipples, giving her a massage, fingering her, or when stimulating her clit and I'm nowhere near as smart as Peter is. Also considering that you went so far as to have Sue state to Peter and I quote "...at least you give a shit..." that he would have taken full advantage of all his abilities and tools as he could ie strength, stamina, flexibility (at least to experiment with positions), wall crawling ability, webs, and anything else I may have missed. I understand that in the first chapter he was still a virgin (I think) and the suddenness of the situation probably wouldn't give him the time to think clearly about taking advantage of his powers so at least not doing so then could be forgiven, but not having Peter use his powers in the second chapter after a time skip, in which I will assume Peter and Sue had sex during cheer leading practice, is incredibly hard to justify especially considering that you've implied he and Sue have been having sex for at the very least a month ( I find it hard to believe that everything you described that happened in the time skip between 1 and 2 occurred in a within the first month of them being Sex Friends). I understand Peter isn't experienced at sex and therefore probably wouldn't be all that great in bed but I feel his spider powers, smarts, and teenage imagination more than make up for it. If this chapter had been about Sue teaching him how to get a woman off without relying on his powers I would have understood and would have actually been more interested in the chapter than I was because after Peter would have learned a more valuable lesson and would be able to incorporate his new found knowledge to his abilities and in time become a certified sex god. I'll admit that you could have him start using his other abilities (wall crawling) in chapter 3 but I will personally always believe that he would have used his wall crawling sooner and of his own volition to surprise Sue and have her experience a wonderful orgasm or baring that Sue would have probably asked him to do it by now. Despite the problems I have mentioned I feel chapter 2 was otherwise great work and I eagerly await chapter 3 and hope you take my suggestion of having Peter use all his other abilities (wall crawling and maybe his webbing later for bondage considering you are already having Sue and him trying to experiment with anal) into consideration for later chapters.
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From redsliver on March 05, 2014
Another excellent little romp. I don't know why but I like Sue best when she's cheating on Reed. As for the story itself, I liked it, but I don't really have any real specifics as to why. It was just fun and edible.
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From MrRigger on February 27, 2014
I'd love to see more of this one. Seeing Peter and Sue go at it on the football field during cheerleading practice sounds like a lot of fun.
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From AnansiScribe on February 27, 2014
Quibbling about the exact source of Spider-Man's powers aside, this was a pretty good Peter/Sue coupling fic. Don't see those all that often, and that is a real shame. Invisibility-enabled exhibitionism never looked so sexy before, but aside from that, I really enjoyed Peter and Sue commiserating together about the sorry states of their love lives before they got to the actual sex, which wasn't bad.

"I think our lives suck. Everyone�s life sucks, at least a little, somehow. And when your life sucks in a certain way, you figure out how to deal with that kind of sucking. And someone else whose life sucks in a different way, they have their own way of dealing with their sucking. And so, if their life sucks in some new way that�s something like the way your life sucks, you can tell them how to deal. And they can tell you how to deal when your life sucks like theirs. And maybe if we all just stopped thinking how our lives are sucking and thought about how other people�s lives suck�maybe we could all figure out what we�re supposed to do with this huge, sucky world."

A very touching and heartfelt piece to fit into an adult fic, but who says adult fics can't say something true and profound about the state of the world or how we as humans interact with each other? Made me think of myself and a dear friend of mine, since we're both going through serious "life sucks" issues right now. Thank you, so very much, for making me feel sappy when I'm supposed to get fappy. No offense meant. And it's also very in character for Peter, who is a deeply sensitive and caring individual whose whole thing is that having power should just mean having more ways to help people instead of just making yourself rich or lording it over other people. For the record, I'd like to see the sequel where Sue turns herself and Peter invisible so they can do it in the football field during cheerleader tryouts, just like she said.
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