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Reviews for Corruption Is Just Another Change of Perspective

By : Ksennin
  • From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2015
    Please restart and continue this story, I'd honestly love to read more, would love for there to be something more involving Jean and Rachel, including Scott or Alex. Or perhaps even Valeria's fall into the club only to find herself tangled up with not only her mother but her mother and Franklin (or even better/worse, her mother and Doom).


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  • From ANON - Anon on November 07, 2014
    Really hope you continue this story.
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  • From Oric13 on May 21, 2014
    Wow! Great series. I especially loved the Rachel/Jean stuff and basically everything with Rogue. Seeing the usually modestly dressed voluptuous southern gall passionately slutting it up in front of a crowd was hella sexy.
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  • From ANON - Real spider on April 14, 2014
    Are you by any chance going to add a certain Mary Jane yes or no?
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  • From ANON - icm90 on April 04, 2014
    Haha I knew it was Scott! The ending was great. Hope you write more, maybe with Emma and Scott having sex and forcing Jean to watch.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2014
    Great story, I could do without the drug use but to each their own.
    I am slightly confused about the Jean chapters, the continuity seems off... perhaps that's just me though, but her first chapter presents her as having been alive for a while and the subsequent chapter makes it seem as though she has just returned and it's her first time to the club.

    Otherwise, fantastic story, hope you continue.
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  • From ANON - gio on March 29, 2014
    I'll be honest: the drug use I'm not fond of...

    Everything else though... How do I say it? The scripting of the encounters, the coupling, and the reactions from the written characters have won me over.

    “The only way that will happen is if I decide Scott deserves a threesome for our anniversary—and Psylocke is busy.”

    Is that a Birthday Bash reference?

    LOL Cykes gets referenced a lot so I'm wondering what Emma has in store for him.
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  • From ANON - icm90 on March 28, 2014
    Can't wait for the next chapter with Scott!
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  • From ANON - Doug on March 27, 2014
    Oh, Gods!! I've been looking through for Buffy stuff, and the Last Avatar (Toph always Tops) and found this.
    Ohhh, GODS!!! Just been reading this over the last day and a half or so. Rubbed two out yesterday, and one this morning after chp 3! And Val, too??? I'm so behind in my comic reading I didn't realize what was meant when you had Rachel `Grey` appear til I read the other posts. Emma needs to see she can only go just so far. Maybe try to get to be more human?
    Sue's little trips being what they are are mind-blowing. Try slipping in some others who have broader horizons like Moondragon, or the Dazzler (and broaden hers with maybe Rogue or Mary Jane?). This all started with Sue being bored! so she called some friends... you've alluded to Jan having since that night rimmed her, maybe more than once? With part of chp 2 covering a mission, maybe chp 5 or so does as well, with some girls having an afternoon by the Avengers pool, or with a Hurricane blowing through the Carib. some of these beauties lay about St. Thomas or the like after a bit of HEROing... and when the Sun sets };->
    Hey, this Maylasia 370 thing, maybe a couple of girls come across Sharon Carter (worldly woman that she is) "over" the Indian Ocean and fun breaks out. Mile-high club anyone?
    Now for other stuff. This is Hot, bbuuutt there was several spelling mistakes in chp 4. I agree with another post`er in that #4 "felt" off. But still, PLEASE keep posting to this thing
    I had to look back and read what I posted for some other Marvel fictions here on AFF, and what get me is the 'time'. I found them back in '05' (or earlier) and a couple are still being posted (well, as of a couple years ago), and its interesting how with of Comics, now the Movies, and the HUB ("X-Men: Evolution", "The Avengers: Earth's Mightiest Heroes!" and "Wolverine and the X-Men") we can enjoy characters we've grown up with down the decades and find new things to amaze us.
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  • From AnansiScribe on March 12, 2014
    This story has been a hell of a ride from beginning to present, and I say present because I know you're not done yet, not with so much more blissful and ecstatic degradation for Emma to sensually inflict upon the many ladies of Marvel. The third chapter was something else, though, with not just two redheads for the price of one, but two redheads that are cross-temporally mother and daughter. Then again, with how obsessed Rachel used to be with getting Jean to accept her as her daughter and changed her name from Summers to Grey when she found out her father had been cheating on Jean with Emma, this is perhaps something I should've seen coming down the line. Oh, and for added cross-temporal mother-daughter incestuous goodness, now you've got Valeria Von Doom watching the painful pleasures and pleasurable degradations being visited upon Sue Storm while receiving a somewhat rude awakening to her own sexuality. What a ride, what a ride . . . and it's not over yet, is it?
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  • From ANON - Ragnarok on March 11, 2014
    I read the new chapter, and re-read it.

    It was an overall enjoyable chapter. The inclusion of Kitty is awesome, and Emma's voice continue's to shine through! It's a solid addition, but overall it felt like it lacked a bit in the atmosphere department. It lacked the casual degradation, the subtle details of how Emma keeps people down their knees and wrapped around her toy! I loved when she blew smoke right to Kitty's face, it was completely casual and degrading, just like how she patronized Jean so much and, in the end, had Jean snorting coke and bad-mouthing her own daughter without knowing.

    It was a solid chapter, though! I enjoyed it!

    On a more personal note, I really did miss Jean. It's one of those things you don't know you want until you are shown, and ever since that Jean chapter I have been visiting the site everyday for an update! Sue's chapters are incredible, but Jean's is something else! Loved it. Do you think there will be more of her?

    Regards,

    Me!
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  • From ANON - Ragnarok on March 03, 2014
    I came back to show just how much I like this fiction.

    There are so many ideas that your writting gives me that I would like to bounce past you, each chapter could be the beginning of a new story in itself!

    Continue this as inspiration strikes you, but do continue!

    If you need ideas, inspiration, etc, feel free to mail me!
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  • From ANON - Ragnarok on February 19, 2014
    Wow.

    This is the best thing I have ever read out of a X-Men erotica.

    The writting in itself is incredible, superb, but the situation and the characters, the twists... it's all just too on point to weave into words!

    The Rachel thing in the end? Blew my mind! Just the addition of Jean, written as she is, would be enough, but having Rachel there, and Jean realizing her daughter had been properly broken in and sodomized throghouly by Emma? Woah.

    11/10, my friend.

    Please keep this going!
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  • From ANON - Ragnarok on September 28, 2013
    Just finished the second chapter.

    God damn it, man, uncanny! Keep them coming! This is seriously one of the best X-Men stories I have seen so far! Very eager to see Betsy in other situations still, or how other heroes, X-Men, New X-Men place in this.

    And of course, how Sue deals with the whole cheating, snorting, getting banged thing with a husband on her bed!

    Love the decadence, keep going!
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  • From ANON - Ragnarok on September 23, 2013
    This is just perfect.

    The description, the use of secondary characters, the subtle info that makes you wonder about their past experiences, and Emma/Sue's surrender, everything was great.

    I would love to see another chapter, either continuing the moment it stopped or having Emma step up with Sue, taking her to other rooms or other nights in her whole thing, watching characters like Betsy fully surrender to their Slut personas, or seeing students like Cessily, Sofia or Laura snorting and going at it.
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