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Reviews for X-men Supreme: Scott and Wanda's One Night Stand

By : marvelmaster616
  • From Royboy on June 07, 2013
    As usual, hot stuff dude!
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  • From Daye on June 02, 2013
    Scott and Wanda? There's a pairing you don't see often. Scott gets to screw everyone in Supreme.

    Now I'm really impressed with the length and the numerous different stages of this fic. I think you've really tried to mix it up hear and now have quite the same sequence as usual. And it interesting to have Scott be experienced and take the lead in this situation.

    Buuut, I still think you writing needs some work, descriptively. The wya you do it, well it always makes me feel slightly detached from the events. Like you're giving an overview of what happened rather than a blow by blow account. Things like saying 'they kept at it for x minutes' or 'she rode him and one point his dick came out'. They seperate from the character and the flow of the events. It can never hurt to be more inside a characters head. What at they thinking and feeling as all this goes on? And don't be afraid to limit the scope of the sex to do it. I know you read DS's First time fic and that's at the other end of the spectrum since they're telling a story about a time they had sex, its all about their thoughts and feelings and often not being able to describe the sex much.

    Now all that said, I really do enjoy your writing and hope you keep at it. Especially when you pull off an out of the way unexpected character. I wonder given Scott's comments about her being a good person. And her history in 616 does Supreme!Wanda switch sides eventually? Is their a supreme Avengers for her to join? And does this introduce a possibility for a sequel to this fic?
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  • From ANON - lcm90 on June 02, 2013
    Are you going to do Emma and Scott?
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  • From DrunkenScotsman on June 01, 2013
    Wow, if this story didn't encapsulate the term "crack pairing." Or, in the fine tradition of Monty Python's Flying Circus: "And now for something completely different..."

    All that said, I really enjoyed this vignette. I'm a big Scarlet Witch fan, especially when she's got layers (which I could just glimpse in this story - I'm sure they come out to play more prominently in your overall X-Men Supreme storyline); and, of course, I think she's smoking hot always. Scott's serving his usual role in your stories, that of the mack-daddy who gets all the choice babes - like Wolverine in main continuity or Worf in Star Trek: TNG/DS9. The sex scenes were the right combination of awkward, gentle, and hot, up through the 69 portion. I felt like the story lost steam there, with the hex-sex being somewhat superfluous.

    Thanks for posting, MarvelMaster, and for your support for my work. This story was just the spark I needed to start working on my next chapter... :D
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