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Reviews for Acceptance

By : ScereyahaDreamweaver
  • From ANON - PairpurrbakRighter on October 10, 2013
    I only found this once you'd posted the last chapter, or I would have reviewed sooner. Even the tendency to write 'weary' when you obviously meant 'wary' did not detract significantly from the pleasure I got from reading it. I thought that you captured the characters very well and avoided the far-too common pitfall of making either Bruce nor Anthony too feminine, both of them seemed agreeable masculine and at the same time nicely involved with each other. I found your characterisation of Hulk very refreshing. There were one or two verb-endings which could have done with a bit of tweaking, but for me that did not detract from a cohesive and very entertaining fic, for which you deserve a round of grateful thanks (but which, unfortunately, you may not get as although a lot of people enjoy visiting this site and reading, very few of them seem inclined to offer feedback). I'm going to check out whatever else you may have posted, as your writing style appeals. Thanks for posting the story, you clearly put a lot of thought and effort into it. 'Purr
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  • From Spongybunny on June 24, 2013
    Just to preface this review, I have been a long time lurker on the site and honestly only made an account to be able to review your story so far. I spent the last two days reading up on it after I found it and absolutely LOVE it so far. Honestly, I think the balance of plot and smut is perfect, as well as the internal/external stuff so please keep up what you're already doing. I'm so glad to have finally found a decent Bruce/Tony pairing that doesn't downplay Bruce to an incredible extent and hope you keep up with the dominance he has going for him (although I have to admit I hope Tony gets a chance to be on top sometime). All in all, this fic is awesome and I can't wait for the next update so please, please, please stick with this story. :)

    Your avid reader,
    Spongybunny
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  • From PinkIzzygirl0728 on May 12, 2013
    I really like what you have going here. The story is paced well and I am excited to see the rest of it. I think your characterization of both Bruce and Tony is well done too. I always love it when Bruce is so conflicted.
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