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Reviews for Glorious, not lengthy

By : AerithMon-Kishu
  • From ANON - gnome_man on July 19, 2014
    AerithMon-Kishu writes very well for someone from another country. German and English are close relatives, but as somebody who tried to learn German, I can say that they are different enough for AerithMon-Kishu's skill to be impressive. His knowledge of the technicals, grammar and punctuation, spelling and whatnot, are quite a bit better than some of the other writers that contribute enormous amounts of... stuff. Work that could be pretty good, but just has too many typos for the reader to comfortably deal with. They just get in the way of the story's flow.

    AerithMon-Kishu doesn't have that problem. His story is good, well-written, and the characters are interesting. Sympathetic and clear. I like this story very much and I wait breathlessly for the next installments.
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  • From AFFModerator on April 16, 2013

    Please correct your disclaimer.


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