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From ANON - dat boi on January 07, 2017
Why is the punctuation so bad?

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From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2016
Is too much to hope for that this story isn't abandoned. I would really like to see this continue. Every chapter is great, well paced and structured, real talent on display here.

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From ANON - DEAD on February 10, 2015
I SO WANNA SEE SPIDEY FUCK SQUIRELL GIRL I HAVE A THING ABOUT TAILS
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From Harbinger_Of_Kaos on January 03, 2015
Hmm, another interesting visit from Peter's divine benefactor yields yet another gift, will she visit all of the ladies to expand their horizon's?
Also the next chapter is titled Party girls, that tells me the ladies involved could be a combination of MJ, Felicia and Jen since they fit with that description more than the others ladies. Though I think that an encounter between Him, MJ and Felicia is all are expecting I hope you have Peter and MJ spend the night with Jen since that is the woman MJ was most worried about. Either way it was a nice addition to the series and I hope you update it sooner so we can see who the ladies are to be the first to experience his enhancements.
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From marvelmaster616 on January 03, 2015
Great chapter, man. Definitely one of the best to date. And you even found some time to throw in a quick Spanish lesson. lol So it's sexy AND educational? That's a strange combination, but you made it work. The beginning was really fun, a nice sexy dream full of all the women Peter had hooked up with. It was a little rushed, but at the very least it provided a nice assessment of what had transpired and who he had been with. Sometimes it's hard to keep track so a nice reminder helps. Also, the chat with Anya was very believable. Being so young, I can see her wanting more than just a one night stand for her first time. I think it would've been too much to just have them write it off. So good job with that.

But the development with Mary Jane is interesting. I've been waiting for Aphrodite to make another move like this. I think this is a good way to get her involved again, using Mary Jane to set things into motion. I'm not sure if it was your intent, but was that dream part of her plan too? If so, Mary Jane definitely has the skills and charisma to get the job done so to speak. lol

Again, great job. Definitely one of your best chapters in this story to date. Keep up the great work, my friend!

MarvelMaster616
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From ANON - Fateburn on January 03, 2015
Good chapter please continue soon.
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From Shadow-Of-The-Guardian on January 02, 2015
Very nice in adding the strong possibility of Peter finally having more than one of the girls he's seeing at a time. The mental image of the girls that Peter has already screwed now into threesome and moresome with the other girls definitely is something Marvel Comics should do. A nice addition to what happened the following morning with Peter and Anya. It does have the possibility of it might coming back to bite either Anya or Peter or with his luck, bite both of their asses. That's one part and the other part, getting MJ into some more than just the male/female aspect of sex was a solid addition to the story. Never figured MJ being interested in the same sex but with Aphrodite being the teacher, there are going to be some lesson that she will learn and wonder why she didn't learn them sooner.

I hope to see what you've got planned now that Aphrodite seems to have given Peter an upgrade in his stamina. With all the women he has now inducted into his little harem, he's definitely going to need the extra boost.
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From ANON - Tom on November 18, 2014
Please make a Peter/Sue Storm chapter. I know she's married but it would be awesome! AlsoPeter/Jean, and Peter/Natasha.
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From HaywireEagle on November 18, 2014
White Tiger (Ava Ayala) or Valkeryie would be nice choices. Perhaps a villainess? So many to chose from in that pot. I look forward to the next update.
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From ANON - Arachnidoom879 on November 05, 2014
�How about adding a villainess to Spidey's Harem? Cause' y'know Black Cat's really more of an anti-heroine or anti-villainess rather than a full-fledged one. Someone like maybe Thundra or Menace, or Titania (if you don't like her husband the Absorbing Man) or something.

And what about Black Widow? I'd thought that there would be at least one chapter about her.

As for story ideas, hmm. How about a battle and or bet between the love goddess Aphrodite and the dark demoness Umar? Or maybe the Enchantress or some other evil lust goddes/cosmic entity. Like to decide which is more powerful between love and lust, or whether the villainess can corrupt Peter (and the girls) into thinking nothing except sex and depravity, or which can get Spider-Man on their side or something.

That's all I've got for now. Anyway, good chapter and sex scene, especially liked the part with MJ being jealous of She-Hulk by the way, and can't wait for more.
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From marvelmaster616 on October 25, 2014
Another fun, entertaining chapter with plenty of enjoyable moments. Once again, you find a way to mix things up with these scenes. You've had Peter hook up with all these sex, experienced female characters. Now he hooks up with someone who is a virgin. Something about that seems fitting. lol He's kind of experienced the entire spectrum here. I thought you did a nice job detailing just how different it is with a virgin. I think you were pretty realistic with Anya, right up to throwing in those Spanish phrases. lol That was a nice touch. I can see a girl in her position getting pretty excited. In this case Peter had to really take the lead here, which is kind of a change of pace compared to the She-Hulks and Black Cats of the world. I think it's good for him in that it gives him some balance. He can't always rely on the women in his life to be so firmly in control. lol

Interesting scene at the beginning too. Mary Jane finding out about She-Hulk certainly raises a few questions. Does that mean you'll start mixing in a few three-ways in the future? I think that could definitely be interesting. Either way, keep up the great work my friend. Take care!

MarvelMaster616
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From Shadow-Of-The-Guardian on October 25, 2014
Can't really see this happening in the mainstream comics but I'm more than sure, and along with other readers of this story and comic viewers, have wondered what it would be like if these two characters ever got together. Bit of a stretch but Aphrodite's spell easily works in Peter's favor in this case. There's definitely going to be some kind of a fallout with Peter having taken a teenager to bed. I did like the part where her Spanish heritage did come to the surface, definitely sets the mood of what this character was feeling and that Peter is pretty much, to coin a phrase, dating the rainbow.

I bet a lot of readers are going to be wondering what Mary Jane will do knowing that Peter is having an open relationship with Jen. I like the part where she finds out but initially thinks Peter is into big women since the bra size alone hints at it. Then again, She-Hulk is a big woman but the right kind of bigness. If Tony Stark ever gets wind of Peter's luck with all these women, I can see him asking for some dating tips from Peter.

By the way, I've been wondering about Emma Frost and how she can be added. Before the story arc Fear Itself and Curse of the Mutants (the story arc that dealt with vampires attacking the X-Men back in 2011 which had Jubilee becoming a vampire herself), there was a story arc called Serve and Protect where Logan, Gambit, Storm, and Emma were searching for missing people who were disappearing into the sewers. That team ran into both Spider-Man's villain the Lizard and the X-Men's villain Dark Beast who was experimenting on the Lizard to make others like him but obedient. For a while, only Emma and Spider-Man were left from not being turned into mindless attacking lizards. Eventually the good guys win and everyone is changed back to normal.

You could use this situation into creating an opening for Emma and Peter to get together. If there are those that say it won't work between Emma and Peter, the woman showed no real love for Scott Summers, Cyclops, no matter what she had said before because during the Avengers vs. X-Men arc, Emma went behind Scott's back and had an affair with Namor to which she revealed it to Scott just before the final fight.

With the history that Emma has, maybe Peter can actually be the one person she's always been looking for as a stone that she can rely on. Plus her mental powers in the harem would definitely make for some interesting interactions between the girls and Peter.

Just some food for thought and this still was an excellent latest update for this story.
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From ANON - Sh8ad8ow on October 25, 2014
Good like always, but I really want to see him with Aphrodite again and to see her tell him what�s going on exactly.
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From Harbinger_Of_Kaos on October 25, 2014
Well Anya is in for something all right, hope if you start the group thing we get to see Carol and Rogue first as that one will be explosive to say the least! Though I wonder who would be kinkier in a threeway, Jess, Jen or Felicia?
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From ANON - DSA on September 25, 2014
I've been really enjoying this story. I think in an earlier chapter you mentioned wanting to work Emma or someone in. Maybe there could be an incident when he wants in on a X-Couple and is just invited to join in (like Emma and Scott or Betsy and Warren).
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