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By : AgentGv01

From ANON - sh8ad8ow on July 01, 2013
Good chapter, hope you can work Laura in there at some point.
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From ANON - sh8ad8ow on July 01, 2013
Good start hope to see Aphrodite again at some point instead of this been a one time fling
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From ANON - qwerty on June 30, 2013
Third chapter was asstounding! Really enjoyed it.

I think this set-up with Aphrodite contriving to have Peter have these encounters with women he knows works wonders for a character like Spider-Man. I can't wait to see Silver Sable and Ms Marvel soon get in the action since you've handled them well in your past fics.

A few requests:
1. While it would be amazing to have Julia Carpenter (current Madame Web) be added, it would be plain spectacular if you can have a chapter with her and Jessica Drew (Spider-Woman) having a threesome with Peter.

2. Storm recently reverted to single status and last I saw her she was with Psylocke as part of a new X-Force team. Storm + Psylocke = sexy situation.

3. Invisible Woman
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From Shadow-Of-The-Guardian on June 29, 2013
This scenes with Black Cat and Spider-Man. I laughed a bit at the part where the two entered at the hotel and gave their "names" to the front desk clerk. Especially with her response to it.

So, we got a little more insight into the spell that the Love Goddess placed on Peter Parker. Pretty much anyone that Peter has an attraction to or any woman might have an attraction to Peter, whatever inhibitions either might have is instantly torn down and both enjoy the pleasures. With Aphrodite, it makes sense what kind of love spell it would be. Now, the one question I have is kinda like a flip one. We know the women Peter will be with are overall 'good guys', so what about the girls on the other side of the specrtum? To be clear, I'm not talking about reformed 'bad guys', I'm talking about those that are still criminals and have not really shown to be anything but 'bad guys' There are few that could probably fit the bill but that would be like a side idea.

Honeslty, I would like to see that sort of a twist, like the love spell covers all kinds of love, including dark love and such.

Keep up the work and I hope to see more of this and other stories you have in the works.
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From marvelmaster616 on June 28, 2013
You always capture the best and most provocative parts of Black Cat's sexuality and this chapter once again showed why she's so damn hot. lol She definitely comes off as more adventurous and decadent than others like Mary Jane. Her love of anal sex seems to show that, not to mention her choice of attire. lol I like how you referenced that one hook-up they had in the comics a while back. That seems to be the extent of their relationship, hooking up and hot sex. But under Aphrodite's influence, I think it works perfectly well. lol And nice touch there with the hotel scene and the cos-playing convention. That was a nice bit of humor. lol Overall, I really enjoyed this every bit as much as the previous chapter. But I can't help but wonder how much longer Aphrodite will be content just watching. She's clearly affecting Peter. It's showing in his sexual stamina. How much further can that go? I think the women will have a tough time handling him at the rate he's going. lol But then again, maybe that's the point. Keep up the good work my friend!
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From Ratdogtwo on June 09, 2013
LOVE IT.
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From ANON - Ratdogtwo on June 09, 2013
Awesome consept. I Am loving the story so far keep up the great work
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From Shadow-Of-The-Guardian on June 08, 2013
I was curious on how you were going to write out the relationship between Peter and MJ. It makes better sense for the two of them to start out in this fashion than enter into a relationship right after the love making. I also like how Aphrodite is noticing something isn't quite right consider the spell she placed on Peter. I'm curious to see how both Peter and Aphrodite will deal with the situation that they will put themselves in both by choice and accidents.

The only real question I have is for all the women Peter knows in the Marvel 616 universe, and I know this is very unlikely, but will Peter and Charlie give it another try? As you wrote, she's still willing to work with Spider-Man but has pretty much lost all trust with Peter Parker. Overall, I am curious to see how it will play out.
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From Darksnider05 on June 06, 2013
X-23 really needs the TLC only Peter can provide.
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From marvelmaster616 on May 29, 2013
I've been looking forward to this chapter for quite a while, my friend. You always did some of your best work when Peter and Mary Jane were involved. This was definitely one of your best to date and one of my favorites. You always do a good job of capturing the chemistry between them and throwing in some creative sexual exploits. lol It was somewhat tame here, but I see you really used Peter's strength to it's full potential. lol I'm pretty sure most men would struggle with that kind of act, even if they are well-built. Peter's super strength definitely makes that easier and I think some women may find that extra hot. MJ sure did. lol I also like how you incorporated some of the developments in the comics with Mary Jane starting a club. Do you plan on using that club with future plots? I can see it being a good location to bring some of the women. Maybe there are some special private quarters that Peter could use with MJ and the other women. Plus in a club it would be easier for Aphrodite to keep an eye on Peter and his exploits. lol The comics never really explored Mary Jane the club owner that much. You could definitely do well with this. Mary Jane described the strange attraction and urges she felt around him. Maybe if other women show it as well at the club, that will provide some telling clues.

That bit at the end with Aphrodite was interesting as well. It sounded like she sensed the block that Mephisto put on Peter and MJ. I hope that comes up again at some point. Is it possible that she might clash with Mephisto over this? Or maybe some other mystical force? Well for now, you've set things up nicely with Peter. He and Mary Jane aren't back together, but they're in a position to enjoy other women. lol Black Cat has always shown Peter a good time. I can't wait to read it, but for now you've set the bar pretty high with this chapter. You should be very proud, my friend. Great job! Keep up the excellent work!

MarvelMaster616
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From Ryvius on May 28, 2013
Awesome update.

Yeah, I agree about Ultimate Spider-Man cartoon. It's not very good. Occasionally amusing, but the action and story/drama (or lack thereof) sucked.

Anyway, once again I appreciate the sticking to continuity. I like the idea of MJ owning a bar, can definitely see her doing something like that given the reasons she has in the story here.

Gonna be interesting to see how/if Aphrodite deals with Mephisto's curse/spell.

Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Harbinger of Kaos on May 28, 2013
Love seeing this story keep going, figures that a goddess of love would know that something was up with Peter's love life not going right especially with MJ after what Mephisto did. As far ladies he could be with MJ and Cat are a given, but if we look back on past and present interactions than the other candidates I can see are:

Silver Sable since it was rumored she has a crush on him before Doc Ock planned to make Earth a crispy ball of death.
Black Widow since she was amnesiac there were stirrings there and frankly I think a guy like Peter can really balance her out.
Ms Marvel, I mean lets face it the comics never took the relationship anywhere, I do hope you at least have her not destroy her hair if she won't appear in her well known uniform.
The lovely Spider-ladies Jessica and Julia, though since this is post SI Julia is already Madame web I assume so that could rule her out.

As far as who I like:

She-Hulk: again I think he could do well with her as acting as a balance and he has enough love to care for both forms no matter what.
Rogue: Because there aren't that many pairing with 616 version and she needs someone who doesn't have a shady past for once.
Emma, because Summers is too screwed up right now and she has gone with out with powerful men and has been burned by them.

I do hope you don't mess with Kitty and Bobby, I mean the guy has just as much struggles in love as Peter and deserves this, and as for X-23 I am hoping you get her and Hellion together cause that was another relationship Marvel screwed over without it ever getting a chance to really take flight and she is still a teen so yeah I don't know about her and Pete.

But those are just my thoughts, your story your rules, Peace!
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From ANON - TVO on May 28, 2013
Nice to see things going well for Peter for once.

Great chapter and hookup with Mary Jane. I see next chapter will be Black Cat, nice.

Future chapter babes I wouldn't mind seeing Spider-Man hook up with: She-Hulk, Valkyrie, Ms. Marvel, Spider-Woman (Jessica Drew), Black Widow, and Tigra.
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From ANON - Ryan on April 11, 2013
Intersting take. like the story so far keep up the great work
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From Shadow-Of-The-Guardian on April 05, 2013
Hmm, like the idea of Spider-Man spending a night with someone other than the usual women he's been with. Curious what the Greek Goddess of Love will do for Peter now that he has entered into a deal with her. Also, I like the idea of using Rangiku from BLEACH as the model for the goddess. Can't really see the Goddess of Love in any other fashion, even with all the other women characters in the Marvel Universe so in a way, its a unique twist that I can see working for this story. I hope to see more of this soon.
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